[COMPLETE] DR - The Life and Adventures of Santa Claus, Baum - ke

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » March 31st, 2018, 11:54 am

I'm back at last and have some catching up to do. I'll try to be finished by Monday. Thank you everyone for your patience.

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 1st, 2018, 8:40 pm

leanneyauyau:

Section 22 is PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 1st, 2018, 8:43 pm

Kristin:

What a crisp and clear narration! Very well done. Section 1 is PL-OK. Section 2 has two small corrections:

At 22:40 I heard "Claus told his friends" : I expected "Claus told his old friend"

At 28:44 I heard "heard of the wonderful image" : I expected "...images"

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 1st, 2018, 8:50 pm

Don:

Section 3 of Ak is very nicely done. Just one quick comment:

At 1:55, in the line "one for the less" the word "the" is omitted.

Otherwise, perfectly done.

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » April 2nd, 2018, 5:51 am

Thank you, Philip. Glad to have you back.

GilmoreDon · Post by **GilmoreDon** » April 3rd, 2018, 9:10 am

DrPGould wrote: ↑April 1st, 2018, 8:50 pm Don:

Section 3 of Ak is very nicely done. Just one quick comment:

At 1:55, in the line "one foe the less" the word "the" is omitted.

Otherwise, perfectly done.

Many thanks,

Philip

Here is the file containing Ak's Section 3 lines with the dropped definite article (which is commonly implied in contemporary spoken English) added.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/santaclaus_03_ak.mp3

On to the next section.

Don

linny · Post by **linny** » April 3rd, 2018, 9:37 am

Thank you, Don.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 3rd, 2018, 10:31 am

Don:

Ak Section 3 seamlessly corrected and is PL-OK!

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 3rd, 2018, 10:36 am

Linny:

I have updated the comments regarding AK in the MW and also reset the section status to assigned because there are still two sections to come in. (I hope that was the right thing to do.)

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » April 3rd, 2018, 10:37 am

I think "assigned" works well. I didn't set up multiple sections for the same role. Many of the parts are so small it would have been far too many to manage.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 3rd, 2018, 11:00 am

Thanks

Philip

GilmoreDon · Post by **GilmoreDon** » April 3rd, 2018, 7:21 pm

Here is the file containing the Section 4 lines for Ak. It is 1'37" in length.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/santaclaus_04_ak.mp3

How do you want me to handle the missing "Well?" from Section 1?

Don

linny · Post by **linny** » April 4th, 2018, 5:42 am

If it's not too much trouble would you mind adding it to the end of section 1? If it's a bother then the end of the next section you submit would be fine. Thank you.

Well?

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » April 4th, 2018, 6:52 am

Don:

Section 4 is PL-OK! Nicely done.

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » April 4th, 2018, 6:53 am

Thank you, Philip