[COMPLETE] DR - The Life and Adventures of Santa Claus, Baum - ke

linny · Post by **linny** » February 8th, 2018, 7:12 pm

DrPGould wrote: ↑February 6th, 2018, 8:58 pm Linny:

If you need a DPL (for both the parts and the final edit) I'd be interested.

Philip

Kathrine,
When you have a moment, please add Philip to the MW.

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » February 9th, 2018, 10:00 pm

Done!

linny · Post by **linny** » February 10th, 2018, 4:35 pm

Thank you...and thanks for the move. We are all set.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 14th, 2018, 9:19 am

I've begun to make "mini" scripts for the voices. Hopefully they will come in handy. It will take me a few days to get through them all.

Philip, when you PL, would you mind PLing to the full text scripts as a double check that I didn't miss carrying over a line?

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 14th, 2018, 2:14 pm

Linny:

No problem. Will do.

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » February 14th, 2018, 8:14 pm

Thank you.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » February 14th, 2018, 8:38 pm

Queen Zurline:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/lifeandadventuresofsantaclaus_queenzurline_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/lifeandadventuresofsantaclaus_queenzurline_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/lifeandadventuresofsantaclaus_queenzurline_5.mp3

Just a comment - I don't know that making separate scripts for all the individual voices is helpful - it is (IMHO) better for the characters to see their lines in the context and to be able to read back and forth what happens before and after their lines. Your colour coding is sufficient, IMO.

Also, did you want the narrator to read the footnote about the choosing of "Neclaus" as the boy's name? I thought that was interesting and worth including.

linny · Post by **linny** » February 15th, 2018, 7:00 am

Thank you. You are in for PL.

I’ll double check the script but I think I did leave the footnote in.

I’m still going to do the voices scripts. Most of them are only a few lines and odds are I’ll need some people to help out that may not want to read the entire section for their single line. I believe I picked up enough of the surrounding lines to provide some context.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 15th, 2018, 9:32 am

Elizabeth:

The part of Queen Zurline was read flawlessly. Nicely done. PL-OK.

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » February 15th, 2018, 3:47 pm

Thank you, Philip.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 15th, 2018, 7:45 pm

Here is Necile. You know, I could have sworn she had more to say than that! But I guess that most of the time she's mentioned, she's just there, not actually speaking.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/santaclaus_necile_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/santaclaus_necile_2.mp3

I am a bit perplexed by this section right here though, from section 1:

"We will!" exclaimed the sweet nymphs, proudly. But Necile said nothing. She only folded Claus in her arms and kissed him tenderly.

You've scripted this "We will!" to be spoken by Necile, although the narrator says that she's pretty much the only one who doesn't speak here. I went ahead and recorded it anyway, but I tried to use a slightly different voice.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » February 15th, 2018, 11:10 pm

Linny:

Would you mind if I read Section 14. This is an absolutely delightful reading! I'm so glad you shared it. (Just one question: Does Ryl rhyme with "hill" or "smile?"

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » February 16th, 2018, 5:54 am

That would be wonderful, thank you, Philip.

I was thinking "hill" but I'm not picky.

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » February 16th, 2018, 7:24 am

I'd love to claim Queen of the Faries

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » February 16th, 2018, 7:27 am

Wait, I'm a little confused about how the claiming words in the MW lol. It looks like Queen of the Fairies is a section rather than a role??? Anyway if that's already been taken, I'd like to go for Voice 14 or Mayrie, whichever suits.