Very good, Raj, thank you! I think I'm going to like very much having you for our stage directions!
I do have a few notes for you. You had almost no missed lines, but a few things need to be tweaked.
0:40 You said "Gervaise throws a wet cloth over the clay." You actually do not need to state his name here, because Gervaise has a line to speak before your direction: "Come in." This actually isn't as important, but since there are some other edits to be made, I'd like it if this could be corrected too.
Please double-check the spacing between your lines. Some of them are perfect, but at times you seemed to get in a hurry and speak the lines too close together, which makes editing more difficult. The first instance of this is around 1:08, "WAR. regards it for a few moments in silence. Uncovers the clay." I won't list each instance, but please make sure you have 3-5 seconds between each of your lines.
2:35 "
Colonel Gervaise preventing him" You are missing the "Colonel" here, which is important for distinguishing between father and son.
3:03 Missed line: "
Exit. Colonel Gervaise resumes..." Add "Exit" here.
3:37 "
Colonel Gervaise turning" Again, you are missing the "Colonel."
The rest of the act is perfect, except for the pronunciation of "Psyche." In general, pronunciation is not a big deal at LV, but there are times, if a name is significant, when we choose to be more picky. I think this is one of those times. The Psyche (pronounced SIGH-kee) is an important theme in this play and has a very specific meaning (that of the soul) in classical thought. The pronunciation "sike" is sometimes used in English as a very informal and even slightly derogatory shortening of psychology, or psychological effects, so I want to avoid that. Approximate time signatures for each instance of this word are as follows:
4:07
4:35
4:49
5:07
5:24
6:17
7:00
7:52
8:30
9:15
A helpful trick I learned recently is to start at the end of the recording and work your way backwards with the edits. That way, the time signatures I've given won't have changed, and it should be easy to find the places that need work.
I hope these notes are clear. Let me know if not. Again, very well done! Looking forward to the rest!