EDITING [DR] An Old-Fashioned Girl by Louisa May Alcott - tg

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Post by stoogeswoman » February 12th, 2018, 10:57 am

Hi, BookAngel - OK, here's the missing line from Chapter 6:

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_06_missing_line_narrator.mp3 0.15 KB

As for Chapter 7, I didn't hear the background noise. However, just to be on the safe side, I applied a *very light* second layer of Noise Reduction - not enough to make it sound "tinny" but hopefully enough to make it sound better. Let me know if it doesn't work - thanks! 8-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_07_narrator.mp3 28 min 13.008 sec / 26.45 KB
BookAngel7 wrote:
February 8th, 2018, 6:18 pm
Finally getting to the remaining narrator chapters...

For chapter 6, there is one missing line at 7:35 - "continued grandma, with a mysterious nod"

For chapter 7, I'm noticing a tiny bit of background noise all through the file. It's not much at all, and honestly, I wouldn't have said anything about it except that the rest of the chapters have been so squeaky-clean that I'm wondering if something just got missed. If it can't be cleaned up, it's not a big deal; I just thought I'd mention it and get your feedback before I marked it okay.

Chapter 8 is PL OK!

Thanks for all your hard work! :thumbs:

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Post by stoogeswoman » February 12th, 2018, 1:22 pm

And here's Chapter 9 Narrator 8-) :

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_09_narrator.mp3 25 min 19.003 sec / 23.74 KB

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Post by Twinkle88 » February 13th, 2018, 3:36 pm

Thanks for all the files, Christine! :D
I will be out July 1-10.

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Post by HannahMary » February 14th, 2018, 9:12 am

BookAngel7 wrote:
February 10th, 2018, 5:43 am
Polly chapters 16 & 17 are PL OK! Hard to believe you're almost done with her! I'll try to get back to Fan soon and get her caught up. :D

bookAngel7
Thanks, Angela. I finished recording all of Polly last week and just have editing to do. Hard for me to believe too!
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Post by Twinkle88 » February 18th, 2018, 4:45 pm

I will be out July 1-10.

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Post by HannahMary » February 19th, 2018, 9:43 pm

Polly's chapter 18 is ready for PL. - Time 6:50
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_18_polly.mp3

And some lines to re-assign in chapter 18...
page 6
Polly - "It's bad enough to love someone who
Fan: "I'm not afraid for you, my dear
Polly: "I don't want a superior person
page 10
Fan: "He was disappointed in me last year
Polly: "We don't think so.
Fan: "Thank you all the more
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Post by HannahMary » February 20th, 2018, 8:53 am

And the last of Polly's files... :( I think I will miss her! :)
Time 4:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_19_polly.mp3

Chapter 19 has one of Tom's paragraphs in Polly's color on page 7.
Tom: "That's the rose you put..."
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Post by Twinkle88 » February 21st, 2018, 4:24 pm

Wow, thank you, Hannah!! You've done a wonderful job! :clap: :clap:
I will be out July 1-10.

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Post by stoogeswoman » February 23rd, 2018, 11:06 am

Hey everyone, don't know if this has already been pointed out, but in Chapter 10, on page two towards the bottom, there's a line for Tom within a "Narrator" paragraph which didn't get colored in. It's the paragraph beginning "Maud was twelve now," and towards the bottom, this:

"Maud admired Tom with all her heart, and made a little slave of herself to him, feeling well repaid if he merely said, "Thank you, chicken," or did n't pinch her nose, or nip her ear, as he had a way of doing..."

The line in bold should be Tom's. Thanks! 8-)

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Post by stoogeswoman » February 23rd, 2018, 2:10 pm

And also, here's Chapter 10 Narrator. :-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_10_narrator.mp3 29 min 09.002 sec / 27.33 KB

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Post by WiltedScribe » February 23rd, 2018, 4:04 pm

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Post by Twinkle88 » February 23rd, 2018, 8:59 pm

stoogeswoman wrote:
February 23rd, 2018, 11:06 am
Hey everyone, don't know if this has already been pointed out, but in Chapter 10, on page two towards the bottom, there's a line for Tom within a "Narrator" paragraph which didn't get colored in. It's the paragraph beginning "Maud was twelve now," and towards the bottom, this:

"Maud admired Tom with all her heart, and made a little slave of herself to him, feeling well repaid if he merely said, "Thank you, chicken," or did n't pinch her nose, or nip her ear, as he had a way of doing..."

The line in bold should be Tom's. Thanks! 8-)
Thank you!! I will update that.
I will be out July 1-10.

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Post by Twinkle88 » February 23rd, 2018, 9:01 pm

stoogeswoman wrote:
February 23rd, 2018, 2:10 pm
And also, here's Chapter 10 Narrator. :-)

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_10_narrator.mp3 29 min 09.002 sec / 27.33 KB
Thank ya! :)
I will be out July 1-10.


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Post by stacyiris » February 25th, 2018, 12:17 pm

Hello

Here is Old Fashioned Girl for PL

Chapter 14, Mamie

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionsedgirl__14__mamie.mp3 :40 sec

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Thanks
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