COMPLETE [DR] An Old-Fashioned Girl by Louisa May Alcott - tg

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » January 1st, 2018, 8:28 am

BookAngel7 wrote:Having trouble with my notifications again... I'll try to remember to keep an eye on this, but feel free to PM me if things start piling up.

Okay!

Twinkle, just a note--the three lines at the end of chapter 1, page 3 have their color-coding reversed, with two of Polly's lines marked for Tom and one of Tom's marked for Polly. (Polly's file has all the correct lines, just wanted to let you know to avoid confusion.)

Yes, thank you for catching that and letting me know!

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » January 1st, 2018, 11:10 am

Twinkle88 wrote:
Twinkle, just a note--the three lines at the end of chapter 1, page 3 have their color-coding reversed, with two of Polly's lines marked for Tom and one of Tom's marked for Polly. (Polly's file has all the correct lines, just wanted to let you know to avoid confusion.)
Yes, thank you for catching that and letting me know!

Just noticed that the three lines at the top of chapter 1, page 2 are also reversed--two of Tom's marked for Fanny and one of Fanny's marked for Tom.

Thanks,

bookAngel7

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » January 1st, 2018, 11:53 am

Oops! Thank you!!

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » January 1st, 2018, 1:21 pm

Ready for PL:
5:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
3:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
3:23
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » January 1st, 2018, 1:26 pm

This has been a busy thread, Twinkle, so I'm not sure if you saw my note earlier about Maud, Polly, and Fan needing to be added to the cast list for chapter 17.

And along the lines of bookAngel7, here are the mislabeled parts I have come across in the script so far. (Not your fault, I know! And this is amazingly few mistakes for so many voice changes.) You may have fixed a couple of these already.

Chapter 1, bottom of page 3 through top of 4:
“I do like to ride...” should be Polly’s orange
“Not much,” should be Tom’s green
“How’s Fan?...” should be Polly's orange

Chapter 6, end of page 5 has Polly's color where Fanny should say, "I'll choose again,"

Chapter 7, page 9 - Polly's color where Mr. Shaw should say "There won't be any one to help the old gentleman safely home to-morrow," and Fanny's color where Polly says, "Yes, there will; see if there isn't,"

Chapter 9
page 6: should be Polly instead of Miss Mills saying, “Will you tell me about it? I like…”

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » January 1st, 2018, 1:52 pm

Thank you!!

All this should be taken care of now. Please let me know if you catch anything else!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » January 1st, 2018, 1:53 pm

HannahMary wrote:Ready for PL:
5:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
3:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
3:23
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3

And thank you!

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » January 1st, 2018, 3:36 pm

Polly chapters 5-7 are all PL OK!

bookAngel7

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » January 1st, 2018, 4:54 pm

Thank you Twinkle and bookAngel7. I am so enjoying being immersed in these characters again - like old friends!

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » January 1st, 2018, 6:58 pm

Ready for PL:
6:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
7:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.MP3

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » January 1st, 2018, 7:19 pm

HannahMary wrote:I am so enjoying being immersed in these characters again - like old friends!

Yes!

And thank you for the files!

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » January 2nd, 2018, 12:16 pm

I forgot to mention when posting Polly's chapter 4 that at 6:34 I left an extra take of a couple sentences from the middle of the preceeding speech including a "the" that seemed to be missing in the script. "... for he was in dreadful pain all THE time." You can decide which version to use.

HannahMary wrote:Ready for PL:
6:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.mp3
7:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... _polly.MP3

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » January 2nd, 2018, 2:48 pm

Hello, here is my claimed audio.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... e_kbps.mp3 time 0:22

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » January 2nd, 2018, 8:00 pm

HannahMary wrote:I forgot to mention when posting Polly's chapter 4 that at 6:34 I left an extra take of a couple sentences from the middle of the preceeding speech including a "the" that seemed to be missing in the script. "... for he was in dreadful pain all THE time." You can decide which version to use.

Polly chapters 2 & 4 are PL OK! I think you're right about the missing "the," so I've edited the file to use that version.

Thanks!

bookAngel7

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » January 2nd, 2018, 8:02 pm

adr6090 wrote:Hello, here is my claimed audio.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/ol ... e_kbps.mp3 time 0:22

Thanks, April! Grace is PL OK!

Just so you know for next time, the file name should have the number of the chapter you're reading for (07) rather than the character's section number. It helps keep all the parts for the same chapters sorted together in editing. I've fixed this one.

bookAngel7