soooo Frank is absolutely well portrayed here. I love the hilarious cross-dressing moments, you sound like a prim biddy nice falsetto Very entertaining. And then the switch to his masculine ego is also a very successful transition.ChuckW wrote: ↑January 13th, 2018, 1:50 pmHere's Frank:
Acts 2 & 3 are already PL ok.
PL notes for Act 4:
> at 0:07: "I know you do not think I wish you dead" - you say "not wish I think", which is somehow a different statement
> at 0:12-0:23: "besides, your spirit's so opposite to counsel to avert your resolution" - this is repeated, you can cut out one of those versions
PL notes for Act 5:
> at 1:18: he that stirs first, [Draws and holds out a pistol.] I'll pop a leaden pill into his guts - you forgot to leave some space for the stage directions here
> at 2:27: "Health and all joy unto this fair assembly" - this was the very first line in this act. You repeated it at the very end. Did you maybe want to use that version ? You can either cut it out or put it in the right spot at the beginnning
great performance, thanks Chuck !