nicely portrayed Devorah
she does sound a little bit like a spoilt brat though, and somehow I can't get the thought out of my head that she is Sheba all over again LOL all very fitting though. I see you in a long flowing evening dress.
btw I have never heard Imogen being pronounced like that (wikipedia doesn't even mention this variant either). But it sounds interesting.
Acts
1, 2 and 4 are already
PL ok.
In
Act 3, you missed the same
ALL line than Jael:
>
at about 2:33: ALL. [With various expressions of disgust.]
Ugh! that man!
and I was puzzled at the surplus Good-bye at the end until I found it LOL. I guess Todd will keep the stage directions in place there, but it's a thoughtful touch. (what's that clock chiming after that ? somehow also fitting
)
> something else you missed: you forgot to say "
read by Devorah Allen" in the voice credits. Since you have to insert that missing line in Act 3, could you also correct the voice credit in Act 3, please ?
oh and all Acts are
below 86 dB. I'll make a note for Todd in the MW to adjust volume.
thanks
Sonia