[COMPLETE] The Winter's Tale by William Shakespeare - dlo
I could just re-record it to fit in.
sure of course that would be an option too...if you'd like to have a listen to Tomas' version. But maybe wait until we hear what Tomas will come up with. This is really only a small thing which can be sorted out in the end.Craigos wrote:I could just re-record it to fit in.
Sonia
now this scene is HILARIOUS for some reason. You both (especially Tomas) speak your lines with such pathos and drama which I somehow find very comic. Add to this Craig's Italian mobster accent and it really made me laugh.Craigos wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_3_1.mp3 1:51
Cleomenes and Dion definitely should have had a bigger role.
Well assembled and PL ok
Thanks Craig !
Sonia
This is a servant credit.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_servant_credit.mp3
Thank you.
TA.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_servant_credit.mp3
Thank you.
TA.
thank you Tony, but we already had your servant credit As you can see the Dramatis Personae file is already PL ok and I think it was even you who checked it, if I remember correctly.adonis wrote:This is a servant credit.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_servant_credit.mp3
In any case, to make sure, I just re-checked the file and the servant line is definitely in there. So all is well. Better double than not at all. So thanks.
Sonia
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I merged the Cleomenes and Dion lines for 3.2; it's now ready for spot PL.
Here are the lines for Florizel:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_4_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_5_1.mp3
My apologies for holding things up. I've had much less time for this than when we did Cymbeline. Such is life. Some people have more of it, some don't.
Just Camillo and the Clown left. Have to see what accents/voices I've not yet done.
Here are the lines for Florizel:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_4_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_5_1.mp3
My apologies for holding things up. I've had much less time for this than when we did Cymbeline. Such is life. Some people have more of it, some don't.
Just Camillo and the Clown left. Have to see what accents/voices I've not yet done.
Tomas Peter
oh yes, this works excellently. Both voices come out and the sentence is still understandable. Well done Tomas, you're a merging wizardWiltedScribe wrote:I merged the Cleomenes and Dion lines for 3.2; it's now ready for spot PL.
definitely PL ok now
Sonia
hah ! you had the same idea than me with Perdita, to give them our softest "innocent young" voice ever. Oh my...the dialogue with those to together will be dripping in youthful romanticism LOLWiltedScribe wrote:Here are the lines for Florizel:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_4_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_florizel_5_1.mp3
Well done and Act 5 is already PL ok. That means Scene 5.1. is ready to be assembled, but not by me at the moment. If nobody volunteers, I can probably do it over the weekend.
In Act 4, the first line has a bit of a different meaning:
> at 0:07: “These your unusual weeds to each part of you / Do give a life” – you say “usual”, may be trivial, but I flag it and you can decide whether it need redoing.
Just Camillo and the Clown left. Have to see what accents/voices I've not yet done.
I guess the clown will become a very silly swain LOL Looking forward to that
Sonia
There's something odd about my Kindle download. It's happened before - it switches round First Lord for Second Gentleman and so on. There's no reason Tomas and Craig shouldn't have read each other's minor parts here and eased up on the doubling. I'm sure that was my download, not me. However, everybody handled it (particularly Tomas) excellently well. His Florizel was very soft, gentle and low - excellent. Time to go do dinner.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_5_1.mp3
T,
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/winterstale_5_1.mp3
T,
excellent Tony, that was a fast job. And the scene was so long too. I only cut a few lengthy pauses shorter and there was one part where you doubled the word "Lord" for some reason, which I cut out. I'll reupload the new version and it will be checked in the final assembly of Act 5 anyway. So for now I mark it PL ok.
Everything sounds fine to me
Sonia
I'm not really sure what you mean here I didn't hear any switches in parts.adonis wrote:There's something odd about my Kindle download. It's happened before - it switches round First Lord for Second Gentleman and so on. There's no reason Tomas and Craig shouldn't have read each other's minor parts here and eased up on the doubling. I'm sure that was my download, not me.
I found the part extremely good where Tomas as Florizel and Gentleman talks to himself, and Florizel being so soft and the Gentleman having such a scratchy voice, one really wouldn't think it's the same person.However, everybody handled it (particularly Tomas) excellently well.
Everything sounds fine to me
Sonia
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Thanks, Sonia. I did redo the line, and have re-uploaded for spot PL.Kitty wrote:In Act 4, the first line has a bit of a different meaning:
> at 0:07: “These your unusual weeds to each part of you / Do give a life” – you say “usual”, may be trivial, but I flag it and you can decide whether it need redoing.
Tomas Peter