[FULL][DR-Sketches] Peeps at People by John Kendrick Bangs - kit

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linny
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Post by linny » October 22nd, 2018, 10:28 am

Section 4 is ready for PL.

Your part is PL OK. You missed a word but I don't think it matters. I like your characterization. Well done!

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Post by NemoR » October 22nd, 2018, 10:52 am

Section 4 is PL OK!
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"I find I cannot exist without Poetry—without eternal Poetry—half the day will not do—the whole of it—I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan."

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Post by NemoR » October 22nd, 2018, 10:56 am

..and if not too many, I'd be glad to take the small role of "Hussar" to help finish off another section. :)
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Post by linny » October 22nd, 2018, 11:23 am

I think of these chapters as independent from one another. I would prefer if a voice only appears once per chapter. Other than that, claim as many as you want. We are now 1/2 way to the finish line. :9:

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Post by NemoR » October 22nd, 2018, 3:46 pm

Nemo

"I find I cannot exist without Poetry—without eternal Poetry—half the day will not do—the whole of it—I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan."

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Post by linny » October 22nd, 2018, 4:02 pm

Thank you! I’ll be away tomorrow but will get this checked and the chapter edited on Wednesday.

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Post by linny » October 23rd, 2018, 10:29 am

Change of plans. Here today...gone tomorrow.

Hussar is PL OK. Nice work. :thumbs:

Chapter 6 is ready for PL. When I edited, I took liberty at 5:00. If you don't approve I can change it back.

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Post by NemoR » October 23rd, 2018, 3:27 pm

Chapter 6 is PL OK!

I loved what you did at 5:00 ... it worked so well for that part ... tre magnifique!
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Post by linny » October 23rd, 2018, 5:18 pm

Awesome! Thank you, Nemo. :9:

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Post by bhavya » December 8th, 2018, 9:35 pm

Hello,

Can I read Rudyard Kipling?

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Post by linny » December 10th, 2018, 7:41 am

bhavya,
Certainly! Thank you for claiming. :D

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Post by ellies » December 17th, 2018, 8:58 am

Hi, I can do 1,3 .5 and 7 for now. Probably more in new year!
An interesting project, look forward to recording.
seasons greetings

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Wishing you all a safe, happy and healthy new year!

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Post by linny » December 17th, 2018, 9:34 am

Ellie’s,
That’s wonderful news. Thank you!

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Post by linny » December 21st, 2018, 7:34 am

bhavya,
Thank you for your part. It is PL OK. :D

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