[OPEN][DR-Sketches] Peeps at People by John Kendrick Bangs - kit

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Post by linny » August 5th, 2018, 8:30 am

Philip, I'm going to edit sketch 3 today. I can PL Foon's line during editing.

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Post by linny » August 5th, 2018, 10:25 am

Sketch 3 is ready for PL. There was a line where I couldn't insert the narrators "he said". There was no spacing in the Emperor's line to allow the edit without it sounding choppy. I think it's ok but let me know if we need to go back and ask Spoken4 for a pickup.

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Post by DrPGould » August 5th, 2018, 5:08 pm

Hello everyone:

One correction for Section 10:

At 7:08 the "said he" is missing from the line "Well," said he, "what of the partition of China?"

In my opinion, the piece flows just fine without it....but there it is.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by linny » August 5th, 2018, 5:54 pm

Yep, that’s the place where I couldn’t separate what was I. The raw without creating a dramatic cut. Since you think it flows well, I think we should leave it alone. I’ll mark it as PL OK. Thanks for your help, Philip. :thumbs:

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Post by DrPGould » August 5th, 2018, 8:14 pm

:oops:
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Post by Foon » August 6th, 2018, 1:39 am

Hi Linny/Philip,

Here's my butchered attempt at a French accent for Zola:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/peepsatpeopledr_zola_06.mp3


By the way, there is another role in Zola's section, which isn't listed in the MW!
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Post by Foon » August 6th, 2018, 4:32 am

Foon - Constructive criticism is always welcome!

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Post by linny » August 6th, 2018, 6:28 am

Thank you, Foon. You are in for PL.

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Post by DrPGould » August 7th, 2018, 6:02 pm

Foon:

The Innkeeper is PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by DrPGould » August 7th, 2018, 6:17 pm

Foon:

Zola is word perfect but, the editing spaces in places where phrases like "he said" occurs are very short. If Linny can edit them the section is PL-ok. Otherwise you may have to go back and add some more time in those places.

Many thanks,

Philip
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Post by linny » August 7th, 2018, 10:53 pm

Thank you, Philip

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Post by Foon » August 8th, 2018, 12:15 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/peepsatpeopledr_zola_06.mp3

I edited some extra spacing in--in any case now it'll be easier to identify the locations to cut!
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Post by linny » August 8th, 2018, 10:02 am

Thank you, Foon. I appreciate that. :D

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