[COMPLETE][DR-Sketches] Peeps at People by John Kendrick Bangs - kit

linny · Post by **linny** » August 5th, 2018, 8:30 am

Philip, I'm going to edit sketch 3 today. I can PL Foon's line during editing.

linny · Post by **linny** » August 5th, 2018, 10:25 am

Sketch 3 is ready for PL. There was a line where I couldn't insert the narrators "he said". There was no spacing in the Emperor's line to allow the edit without it sounding choppy. I think it's ok but let me know if we need to go back and ask Spoken4 for a pickup.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 5th, 2018, 5:08 pm

Hello everyone:

One correction for Section 10:

At 7:08 the "said he" is missing from the line "Well," said he, "what of the partition of China?"

In my opinion, the piece flows just fine without it....but there it is.

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » August 5th, 2018, 5:54 pm

Yep, that’s the place where I couldn’t separate what was I. The raw without creating a dramatic cut. Since you think it flows well, I think we should leave it alone. I’ll mark it as PL OK. Thanks for your help, Philip.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 5th, 2018, 8:14 pm

Foon · Post by **Foon** » August 6th, 2018, 1:39 am

Hi Linny/Philip,

Here's my butchered attempt at a French accent for Zola:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/peepsatpeopledr_zola_06.mp3

By the way, there is another role in Zola's section, which isn't listed in the MW!

Foon · Post by **Foon** » August 6th, 2018, 4:32 am

And the innkeeper in section 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/peepsatpeopledr_innkeeper_10.mp3

linny · Post by **linny** » August 6th, 2018, 6:28 am

Thank you, Foon. You are in for PL.

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 7th, 2018, 6:02 pm

Foon:

The Innkeeper is PL-OK! Nicely done!

Many thanks,

Philip

DrPGould · Post by **DrPGould** » August 7th, 2018, 6:17 pm

Foon:

Zola is word perfect but, the editing spaces in places where phrases like "he said" occurs are very short. If Linny can edit them the section is PL-ok. Otherwise you may have to go back and add some more time in those places.

Many thanks,

Philip

linny · Post by **linny** » August 7th, 2018, 10:53 pm

Thank you, Philip

Foon · Post by **Foon** » August 8th, 2018, 12:15 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/peepsatpeopledr_zola_06.mp3

I edited some extra spacing in--in any case now it'll be easier to identify the locations to cut!

linny · Post by **linny** » August 8th, 2018, 10:02 am

Thank you, Foon. I appreciate that.

NemoR · Post by **NemoR** » October 16th, 2018, 3:59 pm

Hi Linny!

I thought I'd see if we can get this kick-started again by claiming Nansen (section 3), Hackman (section 9) and Alfred Austin (section 12)!

As usual, I'll do variations on each voice to differentiate them.

linny · Post by **linny** » October 17th, 2018, 12:45 pm

Thank you, Nemo! I really appreciate the help. I've been a little surprised this one has been so inactive.