FULL[DR] Martyr of the Catacombs by Anon-maryann

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Post by jasonb » August 6th, 2017, 4:45 pm

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 6th, 2017, 5:25 pm

Chapter 2 is PL OK!
In Chapter 7, at 4:08, you say 'May we never see each other again' instead of 'We may never see each other again', which kind of changes the meaning. Also, when you fix that, would you be able to upload another voice credit with you pronouncing the name 'Loo-kool-is' (Basically the same as you said it, but with a hard 'c'?)
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Post by jasonb » August 7th, 2017, 5:21 am

EstherbenSimonides wrote:Chapter 2 is PL OK!
In Chapter 7, at 4:08, you say 'May we never see each other again' instead of 'We may never see each other again', which kind of changes the meaning. Also, when you fix that, would you be able to upload another voice credit with you pronouncing the name 'Loo-kool-is' (Basically the same as you said it, but with a hard 'c'?)
Thank you!
Fixed both of those comments:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/martyr_lucullus_07.mp3
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Post by jasonb » August 7th, 2017, 5:39 am

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 10th, 2017, 2:25 pm

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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 10th, 2017, 7:56 pm

Chapters 9, 11, 13, and 14 are PL OK!
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 10th, 2017, 8:04 pm

Narrator Chapters 2,3, and 7 have been uploaded.
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 10th, 2017, 8:22 pm

The edited Chapter 2 has been uploaded here:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/martyr_02_unknown_128kb.mp3
11:22
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 11th, 2017, 12:32 pm

Lucullus Chapter 15 is PL OK!
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 12th, 2017, 8:23 pm

Edited Chapter 1 is ready for PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/martyr_01_unknown_128kb.mp3
18:38
Thanks Beth! :)
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 15th, 2017, 11:23 am

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Post by Elizabby » August 16th, 2017, 3:22 am

Edited Chapter 1 is PL OK! Nice work with the singing! :thumbs:

Chapter 2 has a couple of odd tapping sounds during Marcellus lines. I suspect the De Clicker might clean them up a bit? If you want to look they are at the following times in the final file:
5:50
6:20
6:28
7:15

If you can't clean them out the Chapter is otherwise PL OK and can be marked so.
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Post by EstherbenSimonides » August 16th, 2017, 7:16 am

Thanks so much!
Here's Chapter 2 again:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/martyr_02_unknown_128kb.mp3
I edited four clicks out, but I'm not sure if those were the four you talked about... :)
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Post by Elizabby » August 16th, 2017, 4:33 pm

Ch 3 PL notes:
@3:05 that knocking sound in the middle of one of Marcellus' speeches

The "boy" voice has a lot of background noise, especially the last line. Might be worth seeing if possible to clean it up a bit?
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Post by GilmoreDon » August 21st, 2017, 1:55 pm

Here is the link to Honorius' lines for Chapter 6. It is 6 min 55.9 sec long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/martyr_honorius_6.mp3

On to Chapter 10

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