COMPLETE [PLAY] Paul Jones by Alexandre Dumas - ToddHW

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excellently played out again, Leanne, these dialogues will become so great :9: Margaret is changing effortlessly between despair and resolution, really great. :thumbs:

Act 2 is already PL ok, but in the other acts I found some errors and missing sentences:

in Act 3:

> at 0:18: “I hope, sir” – I think you read “air” instead of sir. I agree the text is quite illegible there, but “sir” makes more sense

> at 3:14: “I told him all” – you say “still” instead of “all” (maybe this one is optional, although it's a slight change of meaning)

> at about 5:42: missing sentence (p. 60 middle):
“For ever, for ever !”
in Act 4:

> at about 3:50: missing sentence (p. 71 bottom):
“What does she say ? Oh Heaven !”
in Act 5:

> at about 0:22: two missing sentences (p. 77 top):
“I, go to Rennes, and why ?”
“Mother, piety and respect for my poor, departed parent, should, at least, let a longer interval take place between two ceremonies so opposite.”
> at 1:40: “in the heart of our parents” – you say “pursuits” instead of “parents” :hmm:

Sonia

oh, and I almost forgot: your pronunciation of Lafeuille was spot on :thumbs:
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Thank you both.

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excellently corrected, all of them. PL ok now. Margaret is done :thumbs:

thanks
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Thank you.

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Thanks.

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ok Tomas this is official now, no more type-casting as gallant lover; you are the perfect villain :thumbs: You make Count Emanuel such a spoilt arrogant egoist, and keeping this till almost the last word, it is simply awesome to listen to. Especially because I already have heard most of your dialogue partners, Todd, Leanne, and myself of course. This will become SO good.

My favourite scene is where he tries to make Captain Paul duel with him and he refuses. :9: You are getting quite worked up there, trying not to lose your temper, but the boiling rage is palpable.

All 3 acts PL ok.

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Post by bluechien »

Can I please claim: :D

11 Jasmin, valet to Emanuel, Act 1
12 Jasmin, valet to Emanuel, Act 2

thank you!
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bluechien wrote:Can I please claim: :D

11 Jasmin, valet to Emanuel, Act 1
12 Jasmin, valet to Emanuel, Act 2

thank you!
Thanks. Welcome aboard.

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Eva D
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niiice. The disdain for his master is almost dripping from the recording :mrgreen: I really think that is a great angle.

Only be careful to leave enough space between the different chunks. In Act 1 at the end, you speak the three bits without much editing space left out. I think Todd will manage this time, just as a little reminder for you next recordings ;)

Also the filename for Act 1 is mis-named, but that's ok for now, as I will place it in the correct space in the MW.

Thanks for joining the cast :thumbs: PL ok

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Kitty wrote:
Only be careful to leave enough space between the different chunks. In Act 1 at the end, you speak the three bits without much editing space left out. I think Todd will manage this time, just as a little reminder for you next recordings ;)

Also the filename for Act 1 is mis-named, but that's ok for now, as I will place it in the correct space in the MW.
Thank you, Kitty! Sorry :oops: and all noted on the spaces!
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Hello again Todd!

May I claim the role of Baron De Lectoure, Act 3 please.

Thanks,

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NemoR wrote:Hello again Todd!

May I claim the role of Baron De Lectoure, Act 3 please.

Thanks,

Nemo
Thanks.

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