ChuckW wrote:Now that we've reached this point, Sonia, I should probably seek out your opinion on something. I'm thinking of taking out the "scene breaks" (ex. "Scene II, Enid, Eric"), as they're mostly used to indicate to the reader (performer?) which characters appear in which part of the play. These things kinda break up the flow of the play and serve no real function for listeners. They're also, as Todd mentioned earlier, a little confusing.
did Todd mention that ? I can't remember. I don't know really...in other stage plays, the scene announcement of who appears on stage is usually kept in.
I personally like the scene break-ups, because they are a good reminder for a listener, which character will show up, in case they don't immediately remember which voice reads what character.
What I find a bit too much, especially in this play, is the endless stage directions after each name (softly, angry, solliciting), stuff that the readers already convey with their tone of voice, at least most of the time. If you want to make cuts there, I would greatly appreciate.
I also need to record my lines for Eric, but my daughter is sick right now and I'm not sure when I'll get a free moment. Hopefully I can get it done soon though.
oh, I hope it's nothing too serious. Take care of your daughter first, that's more important at the moment.
Sonia