COMPLETE Little Men by Louisa May Alcott-mas

JayKay · Post by **JayKay** » July 23rd, 2017, 9:10 am

Happy Sunday everyone !
Uploaded
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlemen_11_demi_missingline.mp3 00:18
This also has the "Demi Brooke read by Navin line"

Thanks for all the nice words
JayKay

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » July 23rd, 2017, 11:50 am

PL OK!

Thanks to you both so much for swooping in and helping out!!!

AdeledePignerolles · Post by **AdeledePignerolles** » July 23rd, 2017, 7:38 pm

Here's edited Chapter 4!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlemen_04_alcott_128kb.mp3 24:41
Thanks! Let me know if the spacing sounds alright and everything

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » July 24th, 2017, 8:17 am

Chapter 4 is PL OK!

The spacing is great!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » July 24th, 2017, 9:18 pm

AdeledePignerolles wrote:Here's Chapter 1 with the new Demi!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlemen_01_alcott_128kb.mp3 30:38

Great! I'll get on to PLing for these - I was unsubscribed for a while until we had completed chapters, but I'm back on board now!

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » July 25th, 2017, 7:10 am

Yay, thanks!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » July 25th, 2017, 10:12 pm

Final edited Chapter 1 is PL OK!

I love all the voices together, and the boys are all perfectly matched with voice and part!

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » July 26th, 2017, 1:27 am

I know, aren't they awesome?!? Can't wait to hear everyone put together!

bookAngel7

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » July 26th, 2017, 9:53 pm

Final Chapters 2 and 3 are both PL OK!

AdeledePignerolles · Post by **AdeledePignerolles** » July 27th, 2017, 6:11 am

Here's edited Chapter 5!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlemen_05_alcott_128kb.mp3
Thanks!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » July 28th, 2017, 4:00 am

Chapter 5 was so sweet! There are just two PL "suggestions", both optional:

@39:01 the narration says "asked both children" but it appears to be only Rachel (Daisy) saying "What?" Not sure if you want to add Demi's voice here, or if that would require a re-read?

Also, there are 10 seconds of silence at the end - I wouldn't change it if this is the only thing, but if you are editing the file anyway we only need 5 seconds at the end of every file now, regardless of length. (The LV policy was recently changed on this.)

BookAngel7 · Post by **BookAngel7** » July 28th, 2017, 5:28 am

I just checked Demi's original file, and the "Oh, what?" line is included if you want to use it.

bookAngel7

AdeledePignerolles · Post by **AdeledePignerolles** » July 28th, 2017, 5:30 am

Um...so...

I actually used the "what" from Daisy (Rachel) and the "Oh" from Navin (Demi). The problem is that they sound so much alike that even if you layer the voices it sounds pretty much like one person speaking!

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » July 28th, 2017, 5:57 am

I still think you need both voices present. You could try a slight timing offset to make it clear that there are two voices, if necessary.

Ultimately it is the BC's call so you could wait for that...

Twinkle88 · Post by **Twinkle88** » July 28th, 2017, 6:58 am

AdeledePignerolles wrote:Um...so... I actually used the "what" from Daisy (Rachel) and the "Oh" from Navin (Demi). The problem is that they sound so much alike that even if you layer the voices it sounds pretty much like one person speaking!

Sorry for the hassle, but in that case, maybe it would best to use both Daisy and Demi's complete "Oh, what"s. Unless after listening to it that way you decided it didn't sound good?