COMPLETE Caliban by the Yellow Sands by MacKaye-mas

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Post by plaidsicle » April 8th, 2017, 12:28 pm

thank you so much! I'm glad the mystery of those lines got figured out-- I was not sure at all when I'd have time to go through the text again to check for them.

I will PL as soon as I can.
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Post by plaidsicle » April 18th, 2017, 3:06 pm

kierenmetts wrote:Hello!
Here is Miranda (Sec. 20, prologue)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
Duration: 03:30
just 1 PL note for Miranda in the prologue:

at ~ 0:33, a missing line. Between "What mouth so terrible Utters a voice so tender?" and "Setebos, be kind," we need "But why?"

other than that, it's perfect. thank you!


the "figure" line is PL okay.
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Post by kierenmetts » April 21st, 2017, 1:20 pm

Hello!
Here is the new Miranda, prologue, with the missing line.
Thanks!
Kieren

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3

Duration: 03:39

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Post by kierenmetts » April 21st, 2017, 1:33 pm

kierenmetts wrote:Hello!
Here is the new Miranda, prologue, with the missing line.
Thanks!
Kieren

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3

Duration: 03:39

My apologies--there was some garble on that one. I've uploaded it yet again:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3

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Post by kierenmetts » April 21st, 2017, 1:39 pm

Hello!
Here are files for Miranda, Act I and Act II:


https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_1.mp3
Duration: 02:11

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:45

Thank you!
Kieren

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Post by kierenmetts » April 21st, 2017, 2:47 pm

Hi again!
Also just uploaded Miranda, Act III and Epilogue

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:56


https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_e.mp3
Duration: 00:14

Thank you!
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Post by plaidsicle » April 21st, 2017, 2:49 pm

thank you so much!
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Post by plaidsicle » April 24th, 2017, 6:21 pm

Miranda Act I is PL okay

for Act 2, a long pause in the middle of the first set of lines, from :34 to :38 or so.
I could edit this out later, but it might be safe if you could do it before I dig in to stitching all these roles together.

Miranda in Act 2 is PL okay otherwise.
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Post by plaidsicle » April 25th, 2017, 5:47 pm

just 1 note for Miranda Act 3:

the line at 1:13 I think should be continuous-- "Come, busk him, merry men all:
Aye, both of us"
the "all" does have a colon after it, but it isn't formatted to indicate a different speaker or anything.


Miranda's epilogue is PL okay!
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Post by plaidsicle » April 25th, 2017, 5:56 pm

and if anyone would like to spot-PL my prologue and epilogue edits, we'll be a few more inches closer to getting this thing finished. MaryAnn's PL notes for those are on page 12 and 13.
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Post by kierenmetts » April 25th, 2017, 8:06 pm

plaidsicle wrote:Miranda Act I is PL okay

for Act 2, a long pause in the middle of the first set of lines, from :34 to :38 or so.
I could edit this out later, but it might be safe if you could do it before I dig in to stitching all these roles together.

Miranda in Act 2 is PL okay otherwise.

Thank you!
I will make the fixes in Acts 1, 2, 3 and upload asap....
Kieren

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Post by kierenmetts » April 26th, 2017, 9:20 pm

Hello!
Here are the new, fixed files for Miranda, Acts 2 and 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:40

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:52

Thanks!
Kieren
p.s. in my previous message i said i'd make fixes to acts 1, 2, and 3, but I meant just 2 and 3 :?

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Post by plaidsicle » May 3rd, 2017, 8:21 am

thank you! I will spot PL shortly.
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Post by plaidsicle » May 3rd, 2017, 8:46 am

all good!
not much left now, besides editing.
I have heard from Kristin and she's planning to make her few edits within the next week or so.
I may not have time to start editing everything together until later in May, so no huge hurry. but we are getting close, at least!
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Post by plaidsicle » August 4th, 2017, 2:26 pm

I do want to start editing this soon and I may actually be able to get to it within the next few weeks! I'll see how it goes and ask for help if I need it.

I have not heard back from Kristin lately about her edits... and I don't really want to just orphan those lines... but maybe we will need to eventually. I know Kristin has a lot of other stuff on her plate.

any advice, MaryAnn?



edit to add: I just looked and realized my narrator bits still need PLing, too. I suppose I could post in Listeners Wanted for that, unless anyone here has time to PL those for us.
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