FULL [DRAM READ] Crime and Punishment by Dostoyevsky-maryann

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Post by silverquill » August 26th, 2018, 4:55 pm

Well, just a couple of small roles left - perfect.
I'd be glad to take them

Nikodim Fomitch
Second Prisoner

I'll put them on my schedule for tomorrow.

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Post by linny » August 27th, 2018, 3:11 pm

ekortright wrote:
August 24th, 2018, 5:46 pm
And now, here is the last installment for Luzhin, Section 29: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_luzhin_29.mp3 (duration = 13:36).
Luzhin, is PL OK! Well done! :clap:

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Post by linny » August 27th, 2018, 3:13 pm

Mary,
Have you heard from bghirsch? As soon as Zossimov is complete there is a section ready to edit.

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Post by linny » August 28th, 2018, 9:11 am

Both sections 24 and 25 are PL OK.
pyledriver wrote:
August 21st, 2018, 3:35 pm
Almost had # 23 ready to post when I found I said "Oh, I'm quite obligated to..." instead of "Oh, I'm quite obliged to..." (acceptable variation?).
I didn't look up the full line. Rule of thumb, if it changes intent then it will need to be changed. If it doesn't change intent then it will likely be fine.

Here are the outstanding corrections for earlier sections:
linny wrote:
July 11th, 2018, 8:40 am
Section 19
I found a couple of word changes which change intent.

1:34 "I dare say I do seem to you absurdly anxious about such trash; but you mustn't think me selfish or grasping for that, and these two things may be anything but trash in my eyes. I told you just now that the silver watch, though it's not worth a cent, is the only thing left us of my father's. You may laugh at me, but my mother is here,"
I hear abruptly

4:35 So they don't care to hide that they are tracking me like a pack of dogs. They simply spit in my face."
I hear pair

6:24 Not a doubt they were talking about me before we came.
I hear when

12:32 But if such a one is forced for the sake of his idea to step over a corpse or wade through blood, he can, I maintain, find within himself, in his conscience, a sanction for wading through blood—that depends on the idea and its dimensions, note that.
I hear kind
linny wrote:
July 11th, 2018, 9:07 am
Chapter 21
4:10 missing word (sounds like it was cut off during editing) - "All this is very naïve... excuse me, I should have said impudent on your part,"

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Post by HoosierMary » August 28th, 2018, 2:01 pm

silverquill wrote:
August 26th, 2018, 4:55 pm
Well, just a couple of small roles left - perfect.
I'd be glad to take them

Nikodim Fomitch
Second Prisoner

I'll put them on my schedule for tomorrow.
All yours! Thanks.
Mary

I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime

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Post by HoosierMary » August 28th, 2018, 2:04 pm

linny wrote:
August 27th, 2018, 3:13 pm
Mary,
Have you heard from bghirsch? As soon as Zossimov is complete there is a section ready to edit.
Just wrote him. Thanks.
Mary

I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime

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Post by ekortright » August 30th, 2018, 5:10 pm

linny wrote:
August 27th, 2018, 3:11 pm
Luzhin, is PL OK! Well done! :clap:
Excellent! Thank you very much. I am glad I was able to contribute to this project.
Eduardo
Tenuisti manum dexteram meam, et in voluntate tua deduxisti me -- Ps 73:24

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Post by silverquill » September 2nd, 2018, 11:39 am

Here are two little parts with a couple of lines. I found a skipped a couple of lines for Fomitch Chapter 8, so I'll have to get those put in, tomorrow, I hope:


https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_nikodimfomitch_14.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_prisoner2_41.mp3

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Post by pyledriver » September 2nd, 2018, 12:08 pm

linny wrote:
August 28th, 2018, 9:11 am
Both sections 24 and 25 are PL OK.
pyledriver wrote:
August 21st, 2018, 3:35 pm
Almost had # 23 ready to post when I found I said "Oh, I'm quite obligated to..." instead of "Oh, I'm quite obliged to..." (acceptable variation?).
I didn't look up the full line. Rule of thumb, if it changes intent then it will need to be changed. If it doesn't change intent then it will likely be fine.

Here are the outstanding corrections for earlier sections:
linny wrote:
July 11th, 2018, 8:40 am
Section 19
I found a couple of word changes which change intent.

1:34 "I dare say I do seem to you absurdly anxious about such trash; but you mustn't think me selfish or grasping for that, and these two things may be anything but trash in my eyes. I told you just now that the silver watch, though it's not worth a cent, is the only thing left us of my father's. You may laugh at me, but my mother is here,"
I hear abruptly

4:35 So they don't care to hide that they are tracking me like a pack of dogs. They simply spit in my face."
I hear pair

6:24 Not a doubt they were talking about me before we came.
I hear when

12:32 But if such a one is forced for the sake of his idea to step over a corpse or wade through blood, he can, I maintain, find within himself, in his conscience, a sanction for wading through blood—that depends on the idea and its dimensions, note that.
I hear kind
linny wrote:
July 11th, 2018, 9:07 am
Chapter 21
4:10 missing word (sounds like it was cut off during editing) - "All this is very naïve... excuse me, I should have said impudent on your part,"
Thanks for collecting the corrections. I'm trying to finish editing the chapters I recorded in June, then I'll set up the mike and hopefully do both the corrections and the outstanding chapters.

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Post by linny » September 2nd, 2018, 1:30 pm

silverquill wrote:
September 2nd, 2018, 11:39 am
Here are two little parts with a couple of lines. I found a skipped a couple of lines for Fomitch Chapter 8, so I'll have to get those put in, tomorrow, I hope:


https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_nikodimfomitch_14.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_prisoner2_41.mp3
Hi Larry,
Both of these sections are PL OK.

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Post by silverquill » September 3rd, 2018, 10:04 am

Thanks for the PL, Linny!

And, here is Nikodim Fomitch, Chapter 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_nikodimfomitch_08.mp3

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Post by linny » September 3rd, 2018, 10:12 am

silverquill wrote:
September 3rd, 2018, 10:04 am
Thanks for the PL, Linny!

And, here is Nikodim Fomitch, Chapter 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_nikodimfomitch_08.mp3
No problem, Larry. I'm glad to help.

2:32 missing line - Nikodim Fomitch: "It's clear, quite clear,"

2:40 Extra words - Nikodim Fomitch: "He can scarcely stand upright. And you..."might as well do this

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Post by silverquill » September 4th, 2018, 8:56 am

How did I miss that?
And I just forgot to clip those words at the end/
Anyway, here is the corrected file:


https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_nikodimfomitch_08.mp3 2:52

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Post by linny » September 4th, 2018, 9:21 am

Thank you, Larry. Spot check PL OK :thumbs:

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