Chapter 21
4:10 missing word (sounds like it was cut off during editing) - "All this is very naïve... excuse me, I should have said impudent on your part,"
Mary, the above lines for chapters 20 and 21 were missed in the thread. I added them to the MW.
Correction for googledoc chapter 21, page 15.
Raskolnikov: "Where did you see me this morning?" Raskolnikov asked uneasily.
Narrator line located at the end of Raskolnikov.
linny wrote: ↑July 11th, 2018, 8:41 am
Mary, here is another change for the googledocs.
Section 17 page 3
Narrator: Raskolnikov asked, as though startled. "Then you have not slept either after your journey."
One of the Raskolnikov lines is included for the narrator. The line was read.
Thanks for the catch, linny!
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
Pyotr Petrovitch Luzhin is taking me a little longer than I expected. But I am plugging away. I think I may have one or two sections ready by tomorrow. I apologize for the delay!
Eduardo Quomodo autem posset aliquid permanere, nisi tu voluisses?
aut quod a te vocatum non esset conservaretur? -- Wis 11:27
MaryAnn,
Potential editors should know that if a reader doesn't complete all of the sections then when Mary orphans the role she orphans all the sections for that character. That would mean that any of the parts which have been edited into completed chapters with the first reader would have to be edited again with the second reader.
I can help edit but I'm not willing to have to redo work. Once pyledriver is finished with his part there will be a lot of chapters ready for edit and safe to proceed with.
I really should get on that soon, huh? I'll make it my goal to record a chapter a week starting in August. I will put a notification into my phone right now.
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime