COMPLETE [DRAM READ] Crime and Punishment by Dostoyevsky-maryann

linny · Post by **linny** » July 11th, 2018, 9:07 am

pyledriver wrote: ↑July 6th, 2018, 3:56 pm More!

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_raskolnikov_20.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_raskolnikov_21.mp3

Chapter 20 is PL OK.

Chapter 21
4:10 missing word (sounds like it was cut off during editing) - "All this is very naïve... excuse me, I should have said impudent on your part,"

linny · Post by **linny** » July 11th, 2018, 9:08 am

Mary, the above lines for chapters 20 and 21 were missed in the thread. I added them to the MW.

Correction for googledoc chapter 21, page 15.
Raskolnikov: "Where did you see me this morning?" Raskolnikov asked uneasily.
Narrator line located at the end of Raskolnikov.

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » July 16th, 2018, 6:33 am

linny wrote: ↑July 11th, 2018, 8:41 am Mary, here is another change for the googledocs.

Section 17 page 3
Narrator: Raskolnikov asked, as though startled. "Then you have not slept either after your journey."
One of the Raskolnikov lines is included for the narrator. The line was read.

Thanks for the catch, linny!

ekortright · Post by **ekortright** » July 17th, 2018, 6:52 pm

Pyotr Petrovitch Luzhin is taking me a little longer than I expected. But I am plugging away. I think I may have one or two sections ready by tomorrow. I apologize for the delay!

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » July 18th, 2018, 5:56 am

No worries, and thanks for the update.

ekortright · Post by **ekortright** » July 18th, 2018, 5:20 pm

Here is Luzhin section 12: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_luzhin_12.mp3 (12:07)

Thanks!

ekortright · Post by **ekortright** » July 19th, 2018, 5:05 pm

Hi again Mary,

Just a reminder that of a line that I believe needs to be assigned to the narrator in section 22:

Your son," he turned to Pulcheria Alexandrovna, "yesterday in the presence of Mr. Razsudkin . . .

I am planning to omit those words and record the text before and after as two separate fragments unless you tell me otherwise.

ekortright · Post by **ekortright** » July 19th, 2018, 5:05 pm

And here is Luzhin, Section 16: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/crimeandpunishment_luzhin_16.mp3 (2:50)

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » July 20th, 2018, 6:28 am

Mary,

I see quite a few chapters have parts complete and are ready for editing. If you are short on time, we can post for help to edit the parts together.

MaryAnn

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » July 20th, 2018, 6:29 am

Mary,

I see quite a few chapters have parts complete and are ready for editing. If you are short on time, we can post for help to edit the parts together.

MaryAnn

linny · Post by **linny** » July 20th, 2018, 6:43 am

MaryAnn,
Potential editors should know that if a reader doesn't complete all of the sections then when Mary orphans the role she orphans all the sections for that character. That would mean that any of the parts which have been edited into completed chapters with the first reader would have to be edited again with the second reader.

I can help edit but I'm not willing to have to redo work. Once pyledriver is finished with his part there will be a lot of chapters ready for edit and safe to proceed with.

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » July 20th, 2018, 6:47 am

Eduardo, thank you and I will make that correction now.

I agree with linny re: editing.

Also wanted to let you all know that I'm leaving town this evening and will be away from my computer until Tuesday.

linny · Post by **linny** » July 20th, 2018, 6:49 am

Mary,
I hope you have a great trip. Stay safe.

As an update, when do you think you'll be ready to continue with narration?

HoosierMary · Post by **HoosierMary** » July 20th, 2018, 6:50 am

I really should get on that soon, huh?

I'll make it my goal to record a chapter a week starting in August. I will put a notification into my phone right now.

linny · Post by **linny** » July 20th, 2018, 7:02 am