~FULL [DRAM.READ] Count of Monte Cristo by Alex. Dumas-mas
PL Notes Haidee
Chapter 77
00:21 - Missing line "Then"
00:45 - Repeat of two lines: "I speak sufficient Italian to enable me to converse with you, sir," "and if you like what is Eastern, I will do my best to secure the gratification of your tastes while you are here."
03:25 - You say "she said", the line is "said she",
05:35 - Missing "at a" in this line: "This kiosk appeared to me to be at a considerable distance,"
06:27 - You said "He is the all powerful", the line is "he, the all-powerful"
09:50 - You said "he said", the line is "said he;"
10:30 - You said "without taking my eyes from the object", the line is "without taking his eyes from the object"
13:20 - You say "she said", the line is "said she",
14:18 - You said "repeated Salim tranquilly.", the line is "replied Selim tranquilly."
14:48 - You said "Salim cried", the line is "cried Selim"
15:37 - You said "She said to him", the line is "said he to him."
15:34 - You said "he said", the line is "said he"
I wouldn't normally be this strict, but it kinda goes with the mood of the writing, so some things need to be right:)
Chapter 86
00:15 - Pronounce "Morcerf" wrong, listen to the pronunciation guide
00:18 & 01:14 - Pronounce "Macedonia" wrong, listen to this: http://no.forvo.com/word/macedonia/#en
03:30 - You said: "you still have on your brow your master's blood! " The line is: "you have still on your brow your master's blood! "
Chapter 90, 92 and 117 are PL OK
Chapter 77
00:21 - Missing line "Then"
00:45 - Repeat of two lines: "I speak sufficient Italian to enable me to converse with you, sir," "and if you like what is Eastern, I will do my best to secure the gratification of your tastes while you are here."
03:25 - You say "she said", the line is "said she",
05:35 - Missing "at a" in this line: "This kiosk appeared to me to be at a considerable distance,"
06:27 - You said "He is the all powerful", the line is "he, the all-powerful"
09:50 - You said "he said", the line is "said he;"
10:30 - You said "without taking my eyes from the object", the line is "without taking his eyes from the object"
13:20 - You say "she said", the line is "said she",
14:18 - You said "repeated Salim tranquilly.", the line is "replied Selim tranquilly."
14:48 - You said "Salim cried", the line is "cried Selim"
15:37 - You said "She said to him", the line is "said he to him."
15:34 - You said "he said", the line is "said he"
I wouldn't normally be this strict, but it kinda goes with the mood of the writing, so some things need to be right:)
Chapter 86
00:15 - Pronounce "Morcerf" wrong, listen to the pronunciation guide
00:18 & 01:14 - Pronounce "Macedonia" wrong, listen to this: http://no.forvo.com/word/macedonia/#en
03:30 - You said: "you still have on your brow your master's blood! " The line is: "you have still on your brow your master's blood! "
Chapter 90, 92 and 117 are PL OK
...Which tone things? Sorry, I don't remember, and I couldn't find the postHoosierMary wrote:Oh, I was still going to do the tone thing...is that ok?Kristingj wrote:Benedetto chapter 44 and 45 are PL OK:)
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I was going to put the first two chapters in a higher tone because Benedetto's a kid. Then use my normal voice for the rest (most of which is already recorded...I've been slacking on editing, big time).Kristingj wrote:...Which tone things? Sorry, I don't remember, and I couldn't find the postHoosierMary wrote:Oh, I was still going to do the tone thing...is that ok?Kristingj wrote:Benedetto chapter 44 and 45 are PL OK:)
I'm travelling today, hopefully can do it tonight.
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
Oh! Yeah, give it a go:)HoosierMary wrote:
I was going to put the first two chapters in a higher tone because Benedetto's a kid. Then use my normal voice for the rest (most of which is already recorded...I've been slacking on editing, big time).
I'm travelling today, hopefully can do it tonight.
PL Notes for Julie Morrel
Chapter 29 is PL OK
Chapter 30
At the start, missing "Julie Morrel read by [your name]"
You missed the "both" lines, which is before the other ones: "Then" "we are indeed ruined"
At the end you missed the last one of Julie's lines: "It is his voice!"
Chapter 50
00:53 - sounds like you say "Our accounts are made up of our bills paid", should be "Our accounts are made up and our bills paid"
01:10 - you said. " and have ever undergone more bitter sufferings than ourselves", the line is: "and few have ever undergone more bitter sufferings than ourselves"
02:00 - You said "Oh, we could relate it everywhere", the line is "Oh, would we could relate it everywhere"
03:10 - You said "Oh, do you know him, then?", the line is "Oh, do you then know him?"
03:36 - A stumble over a couple of words, probably something you missed editing out
Chapter 29 is PL OK
Chapter 30
At the start, missing "Julie Morrel read by [your name]"
You missed the "both" lines, which is before the other ones: "Then" "we are indeed ruined"
At the end you missed the last one of Julie's lines: "It is his voice!"
Chapter 50
00:53 - sounds like you say "Our accounts are made up of our bills paid", should be "Our accounts are made up and our bills paid"
01:10 - you said. " and have ever undergone more bitter sufferings than ourselves", the line is: "and few have ever undergone more bitter sufferings than ourselves"
02:00 - You said "Oh, we could relate it everywhere", the line is "Oh, would we could relate it everywhere"
03:10 - You said "Oh, do you know him, then?", the line is "Oh, do you then know him?"
03:36 - A stumble over a couple of words, probably something you missed editing out
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Here are the final versions of the first two Benedetto files. Sorry for the delay.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_44.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_45.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_44.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_45.flac
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
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And one more Benedetto chapter, while we're at it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_56.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_56.flac
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
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Aaaand 2 cancelled flights = unexpected free time for editing.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_64.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_64.flac
Mary
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
I'll be away from LV until mid January.
Dramatic reading: Dostoyevsky's Crime and Punishment
In italiano: Rime
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Here's La Carconte (finally!):
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_44.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_45.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_44.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_45.mp3
~Vanessa Cooley (Tauriel)
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"She walks in starlight in another world..."
~Kili, The Desolation of Smaug
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"She walks in starlight in another world..."
~Kili, The Desolation of Smaug
Do you think I could read Eduard de Villefort? It looks really fun.
Thanks!
Ashur
Thanks!
Ashur
Thanks, they both sound great!HoosierMary wrote:Here are the final versions of the first two Benedetto files. Sorry for the delay.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_44.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_45.flac
HoosierMary wrote:And one more Benedetto chapter, while we're at it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_56.flac
HoosierMary wrote:Aaaand 2 cancelled flights = unexpected free time for editing.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_benedetto_64.flac
And thanks for those:)
Thanks!Tauriel wrote:Here's La Carconte (finally!):
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_44.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_lacarconte_45.mp3
Of course, he's all yours! Have you done a play before? If not, feel free to ask:)TenorBoy wrote:Do you think I could read Eduard de Villefort? It looks really fun.
Thanks!
Ashur
Lucien Debray has been orphaned
Updated Danglars:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_2b.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_76.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_78.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_96.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_106.flac
the first one are the missing lines you PM'ed me about. named it 2b to keep it from over writing the original.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_2b.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_76.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_78.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_96.flac
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/montecristo_danglars_106.flac
the first one are the missing lines you PM'ed me about. named it 2b to keep it from over writing the original.
~ Kristin