OPEN[DRAM.READ]Age of Innocence by Wharton - thw

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Post by adrianstephens » April 19th, 2020, 8:54 am

kathrinee wrote:
April 16th, 2020, 12:42 pm
Thank you!

Here is narrator chapter 22 https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_narrator_22.mp3 (15:57)

Thanks for listening :thumbs:
Hello Kathrinee,

Nicely read - very calming.
PL NOTES

The introduction follows the text in Chapter 22, but not the format of post 1 section 7.
Assuming the latter to be correct, there is a superfluous "by Edith Wharton" at 4.5s and a missing "The Age of Innocence by Edith Wharton . [Book x, Chapter x] at 17.0s.

I'll leave it to the Todd to determine which is correct.

5.05 "allowing for an inherent oddity" s/b "... and inherited oddity"
10:14 "full of de-lie-erz" s/b "full of dahlias" (dai-lee-az)


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Post by adrianstephens » April 19th, 2020, 8:56 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 19th, 2020, 8:33 am
Sorry about the wait.
That was only yesterday! Instant turnaround is not required (though much appreciated).

Thanks, Todd
I was confused (which is my normal mental state) and looked at the wrong date. Thought it had languished a couple of weeks unnoticed.
Anyhow, it didn't.
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Post by ToddHW » April 19th, 2020, 2:42 pm

Thank you.

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Post by adrianstephens » April 19th, 2020, 11:11 pm

benderca wrote:
April 19th, 2020, 2:04 pm
Mrs Welland, Book 1, Chapter 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_mrswelland_4.mp3
Nicely read. PL OK.
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Post by ToddHW » April 20th, 2020, 7:48 am

adrianstephens wrote:
April 19th, 2020, 11:11 pm
benderca wrote:
April 19th, 2020, 2:04 pm
Mrs Welland, Book 1, Chapter 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_mrswelland_4.mp3
Nicely read. PL OK.
Section 4 assembly complete; ready for final PL.

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Post by adrianstephens » April 20th, 2020, 11:57 pm

ToddHW wrote:
April 20th, 2020, 7:48 am
Section 4 assembly complete; ready for final PL.

Thanks, Todd
Thank you, Todd. PL OK.
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Post by kathrinee » April 21st, 2020, 12:43 pm

Here is narrator chapter 22 again, ready for spot-check https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_narrator_22.mp3 Thank you, Adrian, for the careful prooflistening! I appreciate it :9:
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Post by ToddHW » April 21st, 2020, 5:30 pm

Thank you.

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Post by adrianstephens » April 21st, 2020, 11:57 pm

kathrinee wrote:
April 21st, 2020, 12:43 pm
Here is narrator chapter 22 again, ready for spot-check https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_narrator_22.mp3 Thank you, Adrian, for the careful prooflistening! I appreciate it :9:
Proof listen OK. Thank you.
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Post by kathrinee » April 22nd, 2020, 3:51 pm

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Post by ToddHW » April 22nd, 2020, 5:52 pm

Thank you.

(I have chapter 22 assembled, have to groom before it is ready for final PL. So I am trying to keep up with you!)

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Post by adrianstephens » April 22nd, 2020, 11:02 pm

kathrinee wrote:
April 22nd, 2020, 3:51 pm
Here is narrator ch 23 (19:27) https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ageofinnocence_narrator_23.mp3 Thanks!
Thank you. Nicely and clearly read.

At 8:20, there is a duplicate of phrase: "Madame Olenska rejoined, still smiling".
Todd can fix this in the editing, so I'll mark this PL OK.
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Post by ToddHW » April 23rd, 2020, 8:19 am

Thank you.

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Post by ToddHW » April 24th, 2020, 9:25 am

Chapter 23 assembled, but missing a line of Ellen's that was marked for Newland in the script. I PM'd for it, but original reader can not do it. I'll but a plea in the MW and orphan areas.

Thanks, Todd

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