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Here are the lines for Billy Marsh in "A Wicked Woman" -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/awickedwoman_billymarsh_london.mp3

Have a great day!

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Thank you.

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Here are the lines for The Customer in The Reckoning:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thereckoning_customer_wilde.mp3

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Thank you.

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GregGiordano wrote: December 3rd, 2022, 9:53 am Here are the lines for Billy Marsh in "A Wicked Woman" -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/awickedwoman_billymarsh_london.mp3

Have a great day!

Greg
Thanks, Greg! I like the emotion I hear, all the lines are in, and I think you made the right call @5:07 in correcting what seems to be a typo.
There's only one change I really need, which is to have you include the character description in your voice credit line. I'll have you read:
Billy Marsh, A boy from a country town who is just about as innocent as Loretta. Awkward. Positive. Raw and callow youth. Read by Greg Giordano
I'd have included this special instruction, except I didn't notice that the character description was not in the MW's name section. I'll make sure our readers for Alice and Loretta get that instruction too.

Before you do that, though: unfortunately, I think maybe your mic was in a different position from usual this recording session, so I'm hearing lots of air-burst noises too. I can use an EQ filter to fix some of it, but in other places the noise pretty well drowns out your voice. If I could have you fix as many of these as you're willing (in particular toward the beginning of the play), that will make this sound better when completed.

All notes presented back-to-front for editing:
@5:35, "at least"
@3:40, "Got to, just"
@2:43, "Captain Kit"
@2:59, "what Captain Kit says"
@1:37, "to keep a canary bird"
@1:21, "That first night, I didn't sleep a wink"
@0:08, "Loretta"
Then @beginning, the description in voice credit

Sorry to be the one that makes you do so much extra work! :cry:
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jennlea wrote: November 29th, 2022, 8:59 pm May I claim Loretta in A Wicked Woman?
One special instruction for you Jenn: I'd like you to read the character's description along with the name, for your voice credit.
I think the usual instruction is "Read the name as it appears in MW", but I'll have you read both that and the description from the notes field. Thank you!
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redrun wrote: December 4th, 2022, 11:39 am
jennlea wrote: November 29th, 2022, 8:59 pm May I claim Loretta in A Wicked Woman?
One special instruction for you Jenn: I'd like you to read the character's description along with the name, for your voice credit.
I think the usual instruction is "Read the name as it appears in MW", but I'll have you read both that and the description from the notes field. Thank you!
You got it!
-Jenn B.
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Here are all the lines for Billy Marsh (A Wicked Woman) with corrections as requested:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/awickedwoman_billymarsh_london.mp3

Take care,

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Thank you.

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GregGiordano wrote: December 4th, 2022, 1:09 pm Here are all the lines for Billy Marsh (A Wicked Woman) with corrections as requested:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/awickedwoman_billymarsh_london.mp3

Take care,

Greg
Thank you very much, Greg, PL OK! :thumbs:
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stepheather wrote: November 30th, 2022, 9:05 am "The Reckoning" by Percival Wilde
Hello again! May I take the role of the narrator in The Reckoning?
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redrun wrote: December 4th, 2022, 2:50 pm
stepheather wrote: November 30th, 2022, 9:05 am "The Reckoning" by Percival Wilde
Hello again! May I take the role of the narrator in The Reckoning?
Thanks, redrun!
--Stephanie
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Life among the Piutes

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Annual Report of the Commissioner of Indian Affairs, December 1837
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GregGiordano wrote: December 3rd, 2022, 5:01 pm Here are the lines for The Customer in The Reckoning:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thereckoning_customer_wilde.mp3

Take care,

Greg
I have this file downloaded for PL—hopefully I’ll have any notes for you after the outage.

Thanks,
Stephanie
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Life among the Piutes

Native American history--Come read about removal plans, education, and laws:
Annual Report of the Commissioner of Indian Affairs, December 1837
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stepheather wrote: December 4th, 2022, 8:19 pm Thanks, redrun!
Well, in case there's time to grab it before the outage, here's the narrator too!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/reckoning_narrator_wilde.mp3 (10:49)

I've tried to leave just a bit of space between the character name and the stage direction ("The customer -pause- interrupting"), in case you'd rather not have both in. I think either way is pretty normal, so whatever sounds good to you!

You'll also notice I've hammed it up; if you want a straight-laced, matter-of-fact narration, I'm game for that too.
If you want absolutely anything done differently, I'll be around once the site's back up, and happy to re-record or adjust to whatever works best for you. I hope you have as much fun with this as I am, so far!
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