COMPLETE[PLAY]One Act Play Collection 017 - thw

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[WendyKatzHiller]

Here is the finished Who Kissed Barbara?:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_03_various_128kb.mp3
60:32

Wendy has kindly agreed to PL this

I'll get to PLing this in the next couple of days.
Wendy

[WendyKatzHiller]

Here is the finished Who Kissed Barbara?:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_03_various_128kb.mp3
60:32

Wendy has kindly agreed to PL this

I'll get to PLing this in the next couple of days.
Wendy

Excellent job! I really like the pace and the characterizations.

My few notes are all unimportant; nothing changes the meaning of the lines. It's totally up to you if you want to bother correcting them or not.
9:34 Added word "Except the man I was [going] to marry"
14:33 Flipped words "Here am/I"
16:20 Missing word "as he flew out the [hall] door"
20:50 Flipped words "I don't care how/much we"
38:58 Missing word "Don't you think [so]"

Other than that, PL OK.
Wendy

20:50

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[jennlea]

Here is the Cast List for Who Kissed Barbara:

Barbara Nicols, the bridesmaid: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>
Katherine Blake, the bride: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16957">Dawn Sutton</a><br>
James, the butler: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Paul Blake, the best man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a><br>
Horace Gregory, the groom: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a><br>

Should be able to get to the PL Notes this weekend!

[ToddHW]

Thank you. Here's a draft of the complete cast list. Comments?

Todd

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<BR><BR>Cast lists:<BR>
1. Tradition, by George Middleton. <BR>NOTE: Middleton died in 1967. This story is not PD for readers in Europe and/or Australia, and other countries which observe copyright of author's death +70 years.<BR>
George Ollivant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>Emily, his wife: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>Mary, his daughter, an actress: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15580">Joanna Michal Hoyt</a><br>Stage direction: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a><br>
<BR>
2. The Trumpeter’s Daughter, by Joseph Stirling Coyne<BR>
Phillipot <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14540"> Andrew Gaunce </a><br>
Michael Angelo Muller <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170"> Alan Mapstone </a><br>
Robin <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577"> Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Achilles Laplomb <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011"> Greg Giordano </a><br>
Madelon <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852"> Kelly S. Taylor </a><br>
Stage Directions <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205"> James R. Hedrick </a><br>
<BR>
3. Who Kissed Barbara by Franz Rickaby<BR>
Barbara Nicols, the bridesmaid: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>
Katherine Blake, the bride: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16957">Dawn Sutton</a><br>
James, the butler: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Paul Blake, the best man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a><br>
Horace Gregory, the groom: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a><br>
<BR>
4. Pariah, by August Strindberg<BR>
MR. X., an archaeologist, Middle-aged man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">adrianstephens</a><br>
MR. Y., an American traveller, Middle-aged man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Stage directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>
<BR>
5. Hagoromo by unknown, a Japanese noh play, translated by Ernest Fenollosa<BR>
Tennin: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">jennlea</a><BR>
Chief Fisherman Hakuryo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">alanmapstone</a><BR>
Fisherman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">JHedrick</a>]<BR>
Chorus and Semi-chorus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a>BR>
Narrator: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/4174">Availle</a>BR>
<BR>
6. The Forced Marriage by Moliere<BR>
Sganarelle: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17250">arbycoors</a><br>
Geronimo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Alcantor, father to Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">James R. Hedrick</a><br>
Alcidas, brother to Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Lycaste, in love with Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17256">Bahram</a><br>
Pancrace, an Aristotelian Philosopher: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>
Marphurius, a Pyrrhonian Philosopher: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Dorimene, a young coquette betrothed to Sganarelle: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17257">SheriLynnWarren</a><br>
First Gipsy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
Second Gipsy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17023">Lee Vogler</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17752">redrun</a><br>
<BR>
7. Helena's Husband By Philip Moeller.<BR>
NOTE: Moeller died in 1958. This story is not PD for readers in Europe and/or Australia, and other countries which observe copyright of author's death +70 years.<BR>
Helena, Queen of Sparta: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16957">Dawn Sutton</a><br>
Tsumu, her slave: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17525">C. M. Hedrick</a><br>
Menelaus, the King: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Analytikos, his librarian: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Paris, a shepherd: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17250">arbycoors</a><br>
Stage direction: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6574">ToddHW</a><br>
<BR>
8. (In Russian) Самоубийца. Аркадий Тимофеевич Аверченко<BR>
Сценические ремарки: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13587">Kazbek</a><br>
Билевич, самоубийца: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8447">Anastasiia Solokha</a>
<br>Инженер Берегов, его приятель, очень умный человек: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14453">Hanna Ponomarenko</a>
<br>Лиза, горничная Билевича: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
<BR>
9. Cousin Cherry by by Henry Spicer<BR>
Charles, Earl of Mandeville <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011"> Greg Giordano</a><br>
Thomas Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789"> Tomas Peter</a><br>
Jacob Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170"> Alan Mapstone </a><br>
Cousin Cherry <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852">Kelly S. Taylor </a><br>
Elinor Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16999">Krista Zaleski </a><br>
Servant <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205"> James R. Hedrick </a><br>
Stage Directions <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754"> ToddHW </a><br>
<BR>
10. Countess Julie by August Strindberg<BR>
COUNTESS JULIE: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>
JEAN, a valet: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
KRISTIN, a cook: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852">Kelly S. Taylor</a><br>
STAGE DIRECTIONS: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>

[HannaPonomarenko]

I see everybody put Stage directions to an end of the list, let's do the same for #8 and move Сценические ремарки to the place after Лиза.

Nastya, please do a similar change in the file.

[JHedrick]

Thank you. Here's a draft of the complete cast list. Comments?

Todd

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<BR><BR>Cast lists:<BR>
1. Tradition, by George Middleton. <BR>NOTE: Middleton died in 1967. This story is not PD for readers in Europe and/or Australia, and other countries which observe copyright of author's death +70 years.<BR>
George Ollivant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>Emily, his wife: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>Mary, his daughter, an actress: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15580">Joanna Michal Hoyt</a><br>Stage direction: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a><br>
<BR>
2. The Trumpeter’s Daughter, by Joseph Stirling Coyne<BR>
Phillipot <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14540"> Andrew Gaunce </a><br>
Michael Angelo Muller <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170"> Alan Mapstone </a><br>
Robin <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577"> Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Achilles Laplomb <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011"> Greg Giordano </a><br>
Madelon <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852"> Kelly S. Taylor </a><br>
Stage Directions <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205"> James R. Hedrick </a><br>
<BR>
3. Who Kissed Barbara by Franz Rickaby<BR>
Barbara Nicols, the bridesmaid: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>
Katherine Blake, the bride: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16957">Dawn Sutton</a><br>
James, the butler: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Paul Blake, the best man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789">Tomas Peter</a><br>
Horace Gregory, the groom: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/11790">TJ Burns</a><br>
<BR>
4. Pariah, by August Strindberg<BR>
MR. X., an archaeologist, Middle-aged man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">adrianstephens</a><br>
MR. Y., an American traveller, Middle-aged man: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Stage directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>
<BR>
5. Hagoromo by unknown, a Japanese noh play, translated by Ernest Fenollosa<BR>
Tennin: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">jennlea</a><BR>
Chief Fisherman Hakuryo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">alanmapstone</a><BR>
Fisherman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">JHedrick</a>]<BR>
Chorus and Semi-chorus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a>BR>
Narrator: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/4174">Availle</a>BR>
<BR>
6. The Forced Marriage by Moliere<BR>
Sganarelle: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17250">arbycoors</a><br>
Geronimo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Alcantor, father to Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">James R. Hedrick</a><br>
Alcidas, brother to Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>
Lycaste, in love with Dorimene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17256">Bahram</a><br>
Pancrace, an Aristotelian Philosopher: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>
Marphurius, a Pyrrhonian Philosopher: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Dorimene, a young coquette betrothed to Sganarelle: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17257">SheriLynnWarren</a><br>
First Gipsy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
Second Gipsy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17023">Lee Vogler</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17752">redrun</a><br>
<BR>
7. Helena's Husband By Philip Moeller.<BR>
NOTE: Moeller died in 1958. This story is not PD for readers in Europe and/or Australia, and other countries which observe copyright of author's death +70 years.<BR>
Helena, Queen of Sparta: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16957">Dawn Sutton</a><br>
Tsumu, her slave: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17525">C. M. Hedrick</a><br>
Menelaus, the King: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
Analytikos, his librarian: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Paris, a shepherd: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/17250">arbycoors</a><br>
Stage direction: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6574">ToddHW</a><br>
<BR>
8. (In Russian) Самоубийца. Аркадий Тимофеевич Аверченко<BR>
Сценические ремарки: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13587">Kazbek</a><br>
Билевич, самоубийца: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8447">Anastasiia Solokha</a>
<br>Инженер Берегов, его приятель, очень умный человек: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14453">Hanna Ponomarenko</a>
<br>Лиза, горничная Билевича: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
<BR>
9. Cousin Cherry by by Henry Spicer<BR>
Charles, Earl of Mandeville <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011"> Greg Giordano</a><br>
Thomas Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10789"> Tomas Peter</a><br>
Jacob Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170"> Alan Mapstone </a><br>
Cousin Cherry <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852">Kelly S. Taylor </a><br>
Elinor Primrose <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16999">Krista Zaleski </a><br>
Servant <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205"> James R. Hedrick </a><br>
Stage Directions <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754"> ToddHW </a><br>
<BR>
10. Countess Julie by August Strindberg<BR>
COUNTESS JULIE: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a><br>
JEAN, a valet: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a><br>
KRISTIN, a cook: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13852">Kelly S. Taylor</a><br>
STAGE DIRECTIONS: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>

Hi Todd,

I noticed that for #5, Hagoromo, the names are all forum handles rather than actual names.

[ToddHW]

Thank you. Fixed in MW database.

Todd

[ToddHW]

I see everybody put Stage directions to an end of the list, let's do the same for #8 and move Сценические ремарки to the place after Лиза.

Nastya, please do a similar change in the file.

Thank you. Fixed in MW database.

Todd

[ShiNeko]

Звучит хорошо. Большое спасибо! Есть пара замечаний по паузам.
Sec 9 PL notes.
3:16 надо сделать паузу больше перед "барин голубчик"
5:09 надо сделать паузу больше после "два квартала"
7:36 надо сделать паузу больше перед "отдай их чёрту"
8:22 надо сделать паузу больше после "глядя"
17:35 надо сделать паузу больше перед "ну вот"
18:24 надо сделать паузу больше после "человек"
20:21 надо сделать паузу больше перед "чудесно"
28:39 "ну что ж, пойдём" переделать
28:45 "спокойной ночи" переделать

Последние два пункта я перезапишу и скину отдельным файлом сегодня-завтра.

Done

Nastya, please do a similar change in the file.

Was this way from the very beginning.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_08_various_128kb.mp3
29:04

[ToddHW]

Thank you. We're just waiting on spot PL of the final two plays and then this can be cataloged!

Todd

[jennlea]

Excellent job! I really like the pace and the characterizations.

My few notes are all unimportant; nothing changes the meaning of the lines. It's totally up to you if you want to bother correcting them or not.
9:34 Added word "Except the man I was [going] to marry"
14:33 Flipped words "Here am/I"
16:20 Missing word "as he flew out the [hall] door"
20:50 Flipped words "I don't care how/much we"
38:58 Missing word "Don't you think [so]"

Other than that, PL OK.
Wendy

Thank you so much, Wendy! I've gone ahead and corrected all the spots you mentioned:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_03_various_128kb.mp3
60:34

[HannaPonomarenko]

Звучит хорошо. Большое спасибо! Есть пара замечаний по паузам.
Sec 9 PL notes.
3:16 надо сделать паузу больше перед "барин голубчик"
5:09 надо сделать паузу больше после "два квартала"
7:36 надо сделать паузу больше перед "отдай их чёрту"
8:22 надо сделать паузу больше после "глядя"
17:35 надо сделать паузу больше перед "ну вот"
18:24 надо сделать паузу больше после "человек"
20:21 надо сделать паузу больше перед "чудесно"
28:39 "ну что ж, пойдём" переделать
28:45 "спокойной ночи" переделать

Последние два пункта я перезапишу и скину отдельным файлом сегодня-завтра.

Done

Nastya, please do a similar change in the file.

Was this way from the very beginning.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_08_various_128kb.mp3
29:04

Sec 3 is PL Ok Thank you Nastya!

[WendyKatzHiller]

Excellent job! I really like the pace and the characterizations.

My few notes are all unimportant; nothing changes the meaning of the lines. It's totally up to you if you want to bother correcting them or not.
9:34 Added word "Except the man I was [going] to marry"
14:33 Flipped words "Here am/I"
16:20 Missing word "as he flew out the [hall] door"
20:50 Flipped words "I don't care how/much we"
38:58 Missing word "Don't you think [so]"

Other than that, PL OK.
Wendy

Thank you so much, Wendy! I've gone ahead and corrected all the spots you mentioned:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays017_03_various_128kb.mp3
60:34

I'll spot PL in the next few days.
Thanks,
Wendy