(Complete)[DR] The Year When Stardust Fell - philc

[loon]

Rich. I would enjoy doing some of the missing odd people. Please point me at some and I'll do them quick! Male, female, trans, non binary, it don't matter.

What an offer! How about you start with an evil person - either Nomad in chapter 13 or Nomad2 in chapter 14? I'll look through the parts and try for a variety of others for you as well.

[jennlea]

Hi Rich! May I claim Granny?

Jenn - I'm checking on progress for the Grenny Wicks parts. (I'll also send a PM.)

Oh dear! Thanks for the reminder! I should be able to get her done today or tomorrow.

[silverquill]

Here is the correction for the introduction and Narrator for Chapter 3
(I think I renamed the intro strangely . . . must be that dang comet.)


https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_narrator_00.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_narrator_3.mp3

[loon]

Rich. I would enjoy doing some of the missing odd people. Please point me at some and I'll do them quick! Male, female, trans, non binary, it don't matter.

How about bullet hole in the back? You could do Tom Doyle, chapter 16, as well.

[loon]

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_narrator_3.mp3

There is a missing "Said Ted" at ~7:07 in chapter 3. I can borrow from another place you say that in the chapter - I'll have a few to pick from, so it will be fine.

PL OK (Introduction is PL OK as well.)

[philchenevert]

Rich. I would enjoy doing some of the missing odd people. Please point me at some and I'll do them quick! Male, female, trans, non binary, it don't matter.

How about bullet hole in the back? You could do Tom Doyle, chapter 16, as well.

I am on them.

[philchenevert]

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_nomad1_13.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_tomdoyle_16.mp3

I kinda ate the scenery on Tom Doyle; if it is overdone and too much blood spilled on the track I'd be glad to do it again and let him die a bit more quietly.
Just ignore the spikes.

[loon]

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_nomad1_13.mp3

Phil - could you fix the second line to read

and we either come peaceable and you treat us right

(not peaceably)

Also please read for the credits

Frank Meggs and Tom Doyle read by Phil Chenevert

(I'm trying to shave off seconds from the credits for the story.)

I kinda ate the scenery on Tom Doyle; if it is overdone and too much blood spilled on the track I'd be glad to do it again and let him die a bit more quietly.

Well, this is melodrama isn't it? I would expect no less.

But I think I will move a couple of your coughs to the later part of the chapter nearer to where silverquill reads "A fit of coughing seized him again and blood poured from his mouth."

(Can you tell I'm having way too much fun working on the editing here?)

[philchenevert]

But I think I will move a couple of your coughs to the later part of the chapter nearer to where silverquill reads "A fit of coughing seized him again and blood poured from his mouth."

(Can you tell I'm having way too much fun working on the editing here?)

Yes, yes I can tell you are enjoying this too much. Move my coughs, gurgles and panting dying breaths anywhere you want.

For the credits, did you want me to make a separate, stand alone track with just 'Frank Meggs and Tom Doyle read by Phil Chenevert', or do I edit tthe Tom Doyle track to say that at the beginning and upload it again? <Cough, cough>

[loon]

For the credits, did you want me to make a separate, stand alone track with just 'Frank Meggs and Tom Doyle read by Phil Chenevert', or do I edit tthe Tom Doyle track to say that at the beginning and upload it again? <Cough, cough>

A stand alone track is fine; just tell me what you name it. The track can also contain your reworked line so the nomad in chapter 13 says peaceable and not peaceably. That's half way to peaceable-like - as in knife in the back.

[philchenevert]

Here is the line with my two characters 'Frank Meggs and Tom Doyle read by Phil Chenevert and the peaceable phrase. https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_nomad1_13_peacable.mp3
I named it for nomad 1 and added peaceable to the title. Smart, right?

Let me know if there are any more one liners you think I might help with.

[loon]

Here is the line with my two characters 'Frank Meggs and Tom Doyle read by Phil Chenevert and the peaceable phrase. https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_nomad1_13_peacable.mp3
I named it for nomad 1 and added peaceable to the title. Smart, right?

Let me know if there are any more one liners you think I might help with.

I've been playing with the upload and trying to fit it into the previous recording. The first time around you were more growly and assertive - I'm getting a real jump in attitude when I try to cut back and forth. Could you perhaps record the whole chunk with your aggressive outlaw voice:

"I say we're coming in, and we either come peaceable and you treat us right or
we come in our own way. It doesn't make much difference to us how we do it.
You just call the shots, Mister, and we'll play it your way. We've got two
thousand armed men who know how to shoot fast and straight because they've
done a lot of it the last two months. They're the ones that shot faster and
straighter than the guys they were shooting at."

Thanks in advance.

[philchenevert]

No problem at all, I know how grating it can be when emotions just clash when editing. I will record this tonight, donning my lesser known, but equally fabulous Rougher Guy persona. (I only use it go get chicks)

I've been playing with the upload and trying to fit it into the previous recording. The first time around you were more growly and assertive - I'm getting a real jump in attitude when I try to cut back and forth. Could you perhaps record the whole chunk with your aggressive outlaw voice:

"I say we're coming in, and we either come peaceable and you treat us right or
we come in our own way. It doesn't make much difference to us how we do it.
You just call the shots, Mister, and we'll play it your way. We've got two
thousand armed men who know how to shoot fast and straight because they've
done a lot of it the last two months. They're the ones that shot faster and
straighter than the guys they were shooting at."
Thanks in advance.

[jennlea]

Here's Granny!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_1.mp3
1:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_5.mp3
0:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_18.mp3
1:06

[loon]

Here's Granny!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_1.mp3
1:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_5.mp3
0:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_grannywicks_18.mp3
1:06

Hot dog! Granny Wicks is 100% PL OK and 93% crazy.
You read a Frank Meggs line in chapter 18 - I'll skip past that in edit.

I hope to have you and Meggs shouting 'Kill the scientists!' in the distance behind the narrator saying the same thing. I'll only know if that works when I start layering the voices.

Now starting editing on chapter 1.