thank you so much for helping out here, Sandra. And your high society lady is so exquisitely acted out, she could be a younger sister to Oscar Wilde. Loved it.catharmaiden wrote: ↑September 16th, 2022, 4:38 amhere is the first lady:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_firstlady_5.mp3 (1:04)
absolutely PL ok
well I am glad you liked it because there is more to comeMiller4815 wrote: ↑September 27th, 2022, 1:25 pmBelville Act One ready
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_1.mp3
Had fun with that
And you portrayed Belville exquisitely, he is a touch Wilde-esquely arrogant at times, but there's a good character underneath, one can feel that. Looking forward to your next acts.thank you, Jenn, you are immersing yourself into the role as always. Which means you are playing her with the needed dose of bitchinessjennlea wrote: ↑September 27th, 2022, 2:12 pmHere is Clarinda:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_clarinda_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_clarinda_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_clarinda_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_clarinda_5.mp3
Well someone has to be the female baddie...I find they are often the most interesting roles. In any case, brilliantly acted, well worth the wait.Thanks, Sonia! I had fun portraying her. I’m thinking I need to keep my eye out for other baddies to playKitty wrote: ↑September 27th, 2022, 2:41 pm thank you, Jenn, you are immersing yourself into the role as always. Which means you are playing her with the needed dose of bitchiness
Totally PL ok.
in our dramas the tolerance level is very high, believe meMiller4815 wrote: ↑October 4th, 2022, 2:11 pmBelville all done!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_5.mp3
He's a little high-strung but I do hope you can tolerate him
the quirkier the better, especially in the comedies. Your Belville fits more the very romantic type, at least in the beginning when he is sighing after his wife. Then in the 4th act you veer into hurt pride and jealousy, well done. I enjoyed it. A great first role, I believe it's the first time you're playing a role for us ?
not sure whether he is embarrassed or making fun of the guy 
Kitty wrote: ↑October 5th, 2022, 2:20 amin our dramas the tolerance level is very high, believe meMiller4815 wrote: ↑October 4th, 2022, 2:11 pmBelville all done!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_belville_5.mp3
He's a little high-strung but I do hope you can tolerate him
Act 5 can be marked PL ok right away.
A few small edits for the other acts though:
Act 2:
> you forgot your voice credit at the beginning: "Belville, read by [your reader name]"
> at 1:13: (p. 16) forgot part of the sentence (underlined) which would make it more comprehensible: "the little understanding he had, and so he commenced fine gentleman"
Act 3:
> at 0:53: (p. 24) you forgot some bit of laughs "ha ha ha" here
Act 4:
> at 0:26: (p. 42) small bit missing (underlined): "a lady in the other room too. hey day, Beauchamps who would have suspected"
> from 0:49 to 0:53: (p. 42) between "on my honour" and "Beauchamps" you can cut the long pause, this is the same speech chunk
> at 1:33: (p. 42) "the word which I had pronounced with so much rapture" – I don't understand the word you are saying here but it's not "pronounced". Maybe a glitch in the audio caused this
> from 1:38 to 1:40: (p. 43) between "chokes me" and "from this moment" – also same speech, pause can be shortened
thanks, great start, hope to hear you in many more plays.
Sonia