COMPLETE[PLAY]The Stolen Heiress, by Centlivre - thw

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Here is the narration:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_5.mp3

thank you Availle, always good that have the narration in, so Todd can start groming his framework.

Nicely done, only unfortunately this was a tricky script again, because many "asides" were mentioned only after the sentence in question. So there are a lot of character names that you need inserted because it actually was the first sentence that was the aside. I hope I managed to find them all:

Act 1:

> at 0:09: repeat: "this is a librivox" – one version can get cut
> at 0:50: could you also include the full list of persons, so we can use the narrator's description in case someone goes AWOL ?
> at 1:31: "Rosco, aside" – we need to include the name here
> at 1:34: "Rosco, aside"
> at 1:36: "Pirro, aside"
> at 1:39: "Rosco, aside"
> at 1:42: "Rosco, aside"
> at 1:44: "Gravello, aside"
> at 1:47: "Pirro, aside"
> at 2:45: "Lavinia, aside"

Act 2:

> at about 0:36: missed line: "Francisco, aside"
> at 1:47: "Larich, aside"
> at 2:06: "Larich, aside"
> at 2:19: "Francisco, aside"
> at 2:22: "Lavinia, aside"
> at 2:26: "Lavinia, aside"

Act 3:

> at about 0:36: missed line: "Enter Count Gravello, Rosco goes and whispers him."
> at 0:49: "Eugenio, aside"
> at 0:58: "Laura, aside"
> at 1:21: "Eugenio, aside"
> at 1:35: "Pirro, aside"
> at 1:39: "Pirro, aside"
> at about 1:51: missed line: "Enter Gravello, Eugenio, Rosco, and Officers."
> at 2:21: "Lucasia, aside"
> at about 2:45: missed line: "Enter Sancho and Tristram, forc'd in by Servants."
> at 2:54: "Larich, to Francisco"

Act 4:

> at 0:49: "Lavinia, to Sancho"
> at 1:01: "Lavinia, aside"
> at 1:04: "Tristram, aside"
> at 1:42: "Lavinia, aside to Francisco"

the good news is that Act 5 is straight PL ok.

Thank you

Sonia

[Kitty]

Here are the servant's lines:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_servant_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_servant_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_servant_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_servant_4.mp3

aha you're trying your hand at another servant here again, very well done, I like the tongue-in-cheek moment when he calls count Pirro ugly

All 4 acts PL ok. Thank you.

Sonia

[Availle]

Here are my fixes, I hope I put it all in at the right spots... Sorry for the delay.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_4.mp3

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Here are my fixes, I hope I put it all in at the right spots... Sorry for the delay.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_4.mp3

thank you so much, Ava. Yes, as far as I could see, the asides are all in now. At least for acts 2, 3 and 4 which are now PL ok.

I have not checked Act 1 yet, because the beginning is missing, your file starts abruptly at "by Larich, a husband for Lavinia", the beginning seems to have been cut by mistake. Could you reupload please ?

Thank you

Sonia

[Availle]

Oh, sorry 'bout that. Try again?

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_1.mp3

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Oh, sorry 'bout that. Try again?
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_narrator_1.mp3

yes the file is complete now and all PL ok, thank you

Sonia

[HelloCentral]

Here's Larich, nasty old thing.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_1.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_3.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_4.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_5.mp3

Rick

[ToddHW]

Without villains, the heroes could not shine!

Thanks, Todd

[Kitty]

Here's Larich, nasty old thing.

nasty indeed. Reading the part of Lavinia in this play I am at the receiving end of your expletives (hussy, baggage and worse). Is this the way of a father to treat his daughter ?

However, excellently played in character, you can really pull off the villain, Rick. I enjoyed your rants extremely and this will sound great when assembled into the dialogue.

All lines perfectly delivered, however careful with some stage directions inside your speeches, please leave a bit more editing space for Todd there as well. Nothing to change this time, but I mention it for future plays.

Acts 2-5 already PL ok.

Just one addition to act 1 please:

> for the voice credit, please always read the full description as you can see in the Magic Window, here: "Larich, his brother, read by..."

thanks

Sonia

[HelloCentral]

Thanks for the tips! I'm marking those pesky stage directions in red next time. Here's act 1 with the proper voice credit.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_1.mp3

Rick

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Thanks for the tips! I'm marking those pesky stage directions in red next time. Here's act 1 with the proper voice credit.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stolenheiress_larich_1.mp3

and PL ok now, thank you

Sonia