FULL [DR] The Golden Road (The Story Girl #2) by L.M. Montgomery -mtf

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For Cecily Chapter 4, there's still a couple of problems with this one line. This time, you say "Mrs. Marwood," and it should be "Miss Marwood"

And the sentence should read: "Miss Marwood says it IS what we put into a year [SLIGHT PAUSE], not what we get out of it [SLIGHT PAUSE], that counts at last."

This time I hear you say "it's not what we put into a year..." or "it's that what we put into a year..." (I'm not sure, but there's an extra word in there that makes the sentence unclear).

And you've left out the words "of it".


Third time's a charm? :wink:



Thanks,
TJ


benderca wrote: June 13th, 2022, 10:58 am
A few notes for Cecily Chapter 4 as well:

0:07
"Miss Marwood says it is what we put into a year, not what we get out of it, that counts at last."

I hear "that we put into a year" instead of "it is what we put into a year" -- Could you also please pause slightly at the commas so the sentence will be easier to understand:

it is what we put into a year [SLIGHT PAUSE], not what we get out of it [SLIGHT PAUSE], that counts at last."

Thanks,
TJ
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benderca wrote: July 12th, 2022, 5:46 pm For Cecily Chapter 24, I have 2 small requests: I know the color coding is unclear, but I had meant for both you and Felicity to say the whole lines:

Beginning (p. 1)
[Felicity & Cecily]: "Is she?"

0:33 (p. 2)
[Felicity & Cecily]: "Who to?"

Cecily Chapter 24 is PL OK!
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jennlea wrote: July 12th, 2022, 8:27 pm Should have some more Felicity soon. I am almost fully recovered from the c-virus and my voice is getting stronger every day!
Thanks! Hope you feel better soon, Jenn!
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Nammy wrote: July 13th, 2022, 8:53 pm Not to be a pest, but have I missed any posts about changes I need to make? I always do them asap, but I sometimes miss them. I know there is somewhere that shows me that, but I can't find it--again! I thought I was doing so well, but another senior moment has hit me between the eyes! :roll:

Carol/Nammy
You're not a pest at all! :D Sorry I'm moving so slowly... There's nothing for you to do at the moment; though, I'm going to ask you to join us in a song... but I want to post an audio, so that we all sing in the same key. I'll do that very soon.

Sara Ray Chapter 30 is PL OK! We are almost done.
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Cecely chapter 4 should be fix now. Third time's a charm. :wink:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_04.mp3
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I am so anxious to listen to the final project! I think it's going to be awesome and adding a song--wow!!!

I think this will be my first completed dramatic role, and I want everyone I know to listen to it! Too bad my mother isn't still living. She was my best fan!!! She even thought I could sing, but I'm not so sure since I have recorded my singing and heard it back!!! :lol:

This is so awesome that so many people can come together to create something so wonderful for the enjoyment of other people for years to come! What can't the whole world do that??? It takes the right people for the job, and the people here are fantastic!

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Here's Jasper Dale for Chapter 25:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_jasper_25.mp3 7:37

Thank you for your patience! I have been travelling a lot lately and haven't often had access to my recording equipment.
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Sorry for the delays still. Hoping to finally record this this week!
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Here's Jasper Dale for Chapter 33:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_jasper_33.mp3 12 seconds

That's it for The Awkward Man! I enjoyed listening to The Story Girl and I look forward to listening to this sequel.
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Here is Ursula at last! Please let me know if you need any changes.


3:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_ursula_02.mp3
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jennlea wrote: July 12th, 2022, 8:27 pm Should have some more Felicity soon. I am almost fully recovered from the c-virus and my voice is getting stronger every day!
Great, Jenn! Thanks!
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llamaart wrote: July 19th, 2022, 4:57 am Cecely chapter 4 should be fix now. Third time's a charm. :wink:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_04.mp3
Thanks, Allie!
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Salvationist wrote: July 23rd, 2022, 7:48 am Here's Jasper Dale for Chapter 25:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_jasper_25.mp3 7:37

Thank you for your patience! I have been travelling a lot lately and haven't often had access to my recording equipment.
Thanks! No problem. We've been busy too... :D
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bethyhope96 wrote: August 7th, 2022, 7:33 pm Here is Ursula at last! Please let me know if you need any changes.


3:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_ursula_02.mp3
Thanks!
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