For
Cecily Chapter 4, there's still a couple of problems with this one line. This time, you say "
Mrs. Marwood," and it should be "
Miss Marwood"
And the sentence should read: "Miss Marwood says it
IS what we put into a year [SLIGHT PAUSE], not what we get out
of it [SLIGHT PAUSE], that counts at last."
This time I hear you say "it's
not what we put into a year..." or "it's
that what we put into a year..." (I'm not sure, but there's an extra word in there that makes the sentence unclear).
And you've left out the words "
of it".
Third time's a charm?
Thanks,
TJ
benderca wrote: ↑June 13th, 2022, 10:58 am
A few notes for
Cecily Chapter 4 as well:
0:07
"Miss Marwood says
it is what we put into a year, not what we get out of it, that counts at last."
I hear "that we put into a year" instead of "it is what we put into a year" -- Could you also please pause slightly at the commas so the sentence will be easier to understand:
it is what we put into a year [SLIGHT PAUSE], not what we get out of it [SLIGHT PAUSE], that counts at last."
Thanks,
TJ