COMPLETE [Play] All That Glitters Is Not Gold by J. Maddison Morton - rap
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Yes, Kelly, the links work; thank you!
L.
L.
Here are corrections to the Stage Directions - Acts I and II:ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑June 21st, 2022, 3:07 pm Kelly,
The end of Act 2 the closing lines will need to reflect the correct author names.
I hope I've correctly captured the notes for Act 2; I've based the edits on the way it's been done for other plays. Please let me know if I'm off base. Thanks.
Act 2:
2:53--add TOBY before (Takes ice and eats it)
6:34--add JASPER before (still walking after her)
6:41--add LADY L. before (L., suddenly turning upon him)
6:58--before JASPER (R), add LADY L (loud and suddenly; Jasper jumps away)
8:30--change JASPER to STE. center
8:39--add (L.) to LADY L.
14:44--add MARTHA before (heavy sigh)
18:35--add MARTHA before (with a strong impulse of affection)
18:42--add STE. before (clasping her in his arms)
23:40--before (hurries to window and looks out) add (goes up L. and looking towards R. window)
31:53--add STE. before (violently to her)
32:19--add JASPER and LADY L. before (anxiously)
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglitters_stagedirections_1_morton_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglitters_stagedirections_2_morton_128kb.mp3
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Hi Kelly,
PL Okay for Stage Directions, Acts 1 and 2.
Thanks,
Lora
PL Okay for Stage Directions, Acts 1 and 2.
Thanks,
Lora
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Todd and Greg,
You two sound great! PL Okay for Todd/Stephen, Act 1.
For Greg/Frederick, Act 1, at :41 I believe the pronunciation for "gout" sounds like "goo"; at 1:16 please remove "in" from "I may well be vain..."
Thanks to you both! I'll get to Act 2 shortly.
Lora
You two sound great! PL Okay for Todd/Stephen, Act 1.
For Greg/Frederick, Act 1, at :41 I believe the pronunciation for "gout" sounds like "goo"; at 1:16 please remove "in" from "I may well be vain..."
Thanks to you both! I'll get to Act 2 shortly.
Lora
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Lora,
I have made the two corrections to Act One. Please note: I do not know how to make the word "gout" sound more like the word "gout." I hope this sounds good for you.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_frederickplum_1.mp3
New run time is 8:21
Take care,
Greg
I have made the two corrections to Act One. Please note: I do not know how to make the word "gout" sound more like the word "gout." I hope this sounds good for you.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_frederickplum_1.mp3
New run time is 8:21
Take care,
Greg
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Thank you, Greg; PL Okay for Frederick, Act 1.
L.
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Lady Valeria ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_1.mp3
(4:27)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_2.mp3
(4:25)
By the way, there is a frightened exclamation at the beginning of the act 2 file that was hidden in the stage directions. Just wanted to give you a heads up, Lora, so that you're not taken by surprise while PLing
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_1.mp3
(4:27)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_2.mp3
(4:25)
By the way, there is a frightened exclamation at the beginning of the act 2 file that was hidden in the stage directions. Just wanted to give you a heads up, Lora, so that you're not taken by surprise while PLing
Matea Bracic
“Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog it’s too dark to read.”
-Groucho Marx
“Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog it’s too dark to read.”
-Groucho Marx
Good eye! Glad you caught it!EltonTheSnowman wrote: ↑July 5th, 2022, 7:15 am Lady Valeria ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_1.mp3
(4:27)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/allthatglittersisnotgold_ladyvaleria_2.mp3
(4:25)
By the way, there is a frightened exclamation at the beginning of the act 2 file that was hidden in the stage directions. Just wanted to give you a heads up, Lora, so that you're not taken by surprise while PLing
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Hello Matea,
Thanks for the notice about the Act 2 exclamation; I would have missed it! PL Okay for Lady Valeria, Act 1. Here are the Act 2 PL notes:
:30 before "What can Martha mean?" add "And is mine the only heart...meet him!"
4:24 after "no violence!" add "Frederick, I implore--"
Lora
Thanks for the notice about the Act 2 exclamation; I would have missed it! PL Okay for Lady Valeria, Act 1. Here are the Act 2 PL notes:
:30 before "What can Martha mean?" add "And is mine the only heart...meet him!"
4:24 after "no violence!" add "Frederick, I implore--"
Lora
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Kelly,
Please check the link for Frederick Plum, Act 2--the current link takes me to Wendy's lines for Lady L. instead of Greg's lines.
Thanks,
Lora
Please check the link for Frederick Plum, Act 2--the current link takes me to Wendy's lines for Lady L. instead of Greg's lines.
Thanks,
Lora
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Hi Greg,
PL Okay for Frederick, Act 2.
Many thanks,
Lora
PL Okay for Frederick, Act 2.
Many thanks,
Lora
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Wonderful, thank you!ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑July 5th, 2022, 6:35 pm Hi Greg,
PL Okay for Frederick, Act 2.
Many thanks,
Lora
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Hi Todd,
PL Okay for Stephen Plum, Act 2--well done!
Thank you,
Lora
PL Okay for Stephen Plum, Act 2--well done!
Thank you,
Lora
How on Earth did I manage to do that? Oh, well... Fixed now!ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑July 5th, 2022, 6:29 pm Kelly,
Please check the link for Frederick Plum, Act 2--the current link takes me to Wendy's lines for Lady L. instead of Greg's lines.
Thanks,
Lora