COMPLETE[PLAY]Which is the Man?, by Cowley - thw

[GregGiordano]

May I please switch my claim from Fitzherbert to Beauchamp?

Thank you!

Greg

[ToddHW]

Done.

Thanks, Todd

[GregGiordano]

Done.

Thanks, Todd

Thank you!

[panelbeaterva]

May I claim Belville?

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[GregGiordano]

Here are the four acts of Beauchamp:

Act One -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3

Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_3.mp3

Act Four -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3

Act Five -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_5.mp3

Take care,

Greg

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Here are the four acts of Beauchamp:

excellently acted, Greg, as I thought you would you give him the right mixture of brave soldier when defending a woman's honour, but also reluctant obedience to Lord Sparkle and finally shy devotion to Lady Bell. Quite a complex character, well done.

Acts 3 and 5 are already PL ok.

PL notes for Act 1:

> at 0:45: (p. 6) "that my heart has not been insensible of the charms" – you say "indefensible"
> from 1:21 to 1:25: (p. 7) between "dear idea" and "that would be" – you can cut the long pause, it's the same sentence

PL notes for Act 4:

> at 0:20: (p. 33) "and whilst she flies" – you say "the"
> at about 6:40: (p. 43) two missed quotes: "What can I think of all this ?" and "Permit me, Madam, to ask if you have long known Mr Belville ?"

thank you

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

Here are the four acts of Beauchamp:

excellently acted, Greg, as I thought you would you give him the right mixture of brave soldier when defending a woman's honour, but also reluctant obedience to Lord Sparkle and finally shy devotion to Lady Bell. Quite a complex character, well done.

Acts 3 and 5 are already PL ok.

PL notes for Act 1:

> at 0:45: (p. 6) "that my heart has not been insensible of the charms" – you say "indefensible"
> from 1:21 to 1:25: (p. 7) between "dear idea" and "that would be" – you can cut the long pause, it's the same sentence

PL notes for Act 4:

> at 0:20: (p. 33) "and whilst she flies" – you say "the"
> at about 6:40: (p. 43) two missed quotes: "What can I think of all this ?" and "Permit me, Madam, to ask if you have long known Mr Belville ?"

thank you

Sonia

Thanks, Sonia. I will try to fix in the next day or so.

I appreciate the feedback, as always encouraging!

Take care,

Greg

[GregGiordano]

Here are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:

Act One:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3

Act Four:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3

Take care,

Greg

[Kitty]

Here are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3

perfect edits and PL ok now, thank again, Greg

Sonia

[EltonTheSnowman]

Hello, I'd like to claim the role of Julia, please

[GregGiordano]

Here are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3

perfect edits and PL ok now, thank again, Greg

Sonia

Thank you!

[ToddHW]

Hello, I'd like to claim the role of Julia, please

Thank you.

Todd

[kristakz]

May I read Kitty?