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ADKreader1122
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Post by ADKreader1122 »

Hello Andrew,
Acts 1 and 5 are PL Okay for Wildrake. Other PL notes follow:
Act 2
5:23-- add "Die away at melting strains" between "Their concerts" and "Or seem to do so..."
6:55-- Omit "You are used to see..."
Act 3
1:20-- Omit repetition of "to Master Trueworth" and add the missing phrase "Confess my treason."
Act 4
:34-- Change "Lincolnshire" to "Lancashire"
1:04-- Omit repetition of "Don't pine to death."
3:09-- Omit repetition of "Oh, no. In love."

Thanks,
Lora
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ADKreader1122 wrote: May 9th, 2022, 12:17 pm Act 2
5:23-- add "Die away at melting strains" between "Their concerts" and "Or seem to do so..."
6:55-- Omit "You are used to see..."
Act 3
1:20-- Omit repetition of "to Master Trueworth" and add the missing phrase "Confess my treason."
Act 4
:34-- Change "Lincolnshire" to "Lancashire"
1:04-- Omit repetition of "Don't pine to death."
3:09-- Omit repetition of "Oh, no. In love."
Hi Lora, thanks for catching those. Here are the amended versions:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_2.mp3 (8:41)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_3.mp3 (1:31)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_4.mp3 (5:19)
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Post by ADKreader1122 »

Thank you, Andrew--PL Okay on all counts.

Lora
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Kelly,
PL Okay for Act 3. There is a crinkling noise at 7:23 that you might want to check. It took me a bit to realize you'd changed the location of the "Aside" lines--which was a good idea. :)

Lora
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Post by bethyhope96 »

Thank you for your patience. If you want these redone, please let me know and I can work on them Thursday or Friday.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_phoebe_2.mp3
00:09

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_phoebe_4.mp3
00:01

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_phoebe_5.mp3
00:03
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Post by ADKreader1122 »

Hi Bethany,
PL Okay--sounds good to me.

Thanks,
Lora
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Post by ktaylor07 »

ADKreader1122 wrote: May 17th, 2022, 1:40 pm Kelly,
PL Okay for Act 3. There is a crinkling noise at 7:23 that you might want to check. It took me a bit to realize you'd changed the location of the "Aside" lines--which was a good idea. :)

Lora
I've tried a number of different things, but I can't get rid of that crackling noise. I guess I'll just have to ask Alan to re-record that line.

Yes -- almost all the "Aside" stage directions seem to be placed after the lines they go with for some reason. I should have warned you that I was re-arranging them.
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Post by ktaylor07 »

Sorry to bother you with this, but while editing, we've found a crackling noise in the middle of one of your lines in ACT III that I can't find a way to edit out or minimize. It occurs between 5:35 and 5:38 "sour scorn grows sweetness touching her sweet lips." Would you mind re-recording this line for us?
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Post by ktaylor07 »

alatheron wrote: May 10th, 2022, 2:32 am
ADKreader1122 wrote: May 9th, 2022, 12:17 pm Act 2
5:23-- add "Die away at melting strains" between "Their concerts" and "Or seem to do so..."
6:55-- Omit "You are used to see..."
Act 3
1:20-- Omit repetition of "to Master Trueworth" and add the missing phrase "Confess my treason."
Act 4
:34-- Change "Lincolnshire" to "Lancashire"
1:04-- Omit repetition of "Don't pine to death."
3:09-- Omit repetition of "Oh, no. In love."
Hi Lora, thanks for catching those. Here are the amended versions:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_2.mp3 (8:41)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_3.mp3 (1:31)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/lovechase_wildrake_4.mp3 (5:19)
We're missing one more Wildrake line at the beginning of the last scene of ACT V. "I pray you pardon me, Sir William!"
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Post by ADKreader1122 »

Sorry to have missed the Wildrake line, Kelly and Andrew; I will try to PL the acts this weekend.

Lora
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