Ahhhh What an amazing antagonist you gave us!!Kalamareader wrote: ↑January 26th, 2022, 9:06 pm Well, here are my last four:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heartsofthree_torres_22.mp3 ~3:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heartsofthree_torres_23.mp3 ~6:15
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heartsofthree_torres_25.mp3 ~2:01
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/heartsofthree_torres_27.mp3 ~2:51
Now I know why I'm not in the last couple of Chapters.
You may (will) have to do something with the "Maniacal scream". If you want me to do something else, just let me know.
This has been a lot of fun. I had a part like this once before where the character was a 'major driver' in the plot, but really didn't have a lot of lines. A lot of my character's work is in the narration.
Thanks,
Wayne
Torres 22, 25, and 27 are all PL OK
Your scream is awesome, and it edits just fine for use!
Chapter 23 has one extra line at the end, 6:05 - an out-take of "I am not denying. . . " her physical beauty line, which is in place earlier in the chapter, so this one at the end is superfluous.