COMPLETE [PLAY] The Follies of a Day; OR, The Marriage of Figaro (in English)-mas

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 3rd, 2022, 1:26 pm

Act 2 was fun! Well edited and well played by everyone! Didn't hear any volume problems.

Two suggestions for you to do as you see fit:

16:30- I think "Count without" could be cut. To me the Count's line implies that he is still outside of the room.

20:21- also think "Calls" could be cut because it seemed to interrupt the flow and it was apparent with Jake's tone that he was calling.

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 4th, 2022, 9:48 am

jennlea wrote: ↑January 3rd, 2022, 1:26 pm Act 2 was fun! Well edited and well played by everyone! Didn't hear any volume problems.

Two suggestions for you to do as you see fit:

16:30- I think "Count without" could be cut. To me the Count's line implies that he is still outside of the room.

20:21- also think "Calls" could be cut because it seemed to interrupt the flow and it was apparent with Jake's tone that he was calling.

Thank you so much! Both of these are implemented and ready for Spot PL.

I am super grateful for the notes from a fresh ear - after listening so minutely through all the editing, it gets harder to judge the flow sometimes.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 4th, 2022, 8:40 pm

LCaulkins wrote: ↑January 4th, 2022, 9:48 am Thank you so much! Both of these are implemented and ready for Spot PL.

I am super grateful for the notes from a fresh ear - after listening so minutely through all the editing, it gets harder to judge the flow sometimes.

Sounds great! Act 2 is spot PL-OK!

Happy to lend an ear!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » January 6th, 2022, 12:25 am

Missing line as requested:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/follies_stage_3supp.mp3

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 6th, 2022, 6:42 pm

Act 3 is ready for Final PL!

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 6th, 2022, 9:23 pm

No suggestions for Act 3. It sounds great and is PL-OK!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 12th, 2022, 10:26 am

Act IV is ready for final PL

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 13th, 2022, 9:58 pm

LCaulkins wrote: ↑January 12th, 2022, 10:26 am Act IV is ready for final PL

Another great sounding act

Act 4 is PL-OK!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 15th, 2022, 3:17 pm

Woohoo! Act 5 is ready for PL

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 15th, 2022, 3:31 pm

JoannaHoyt · Post by **JoannaHoyt** » January 16th, 2022, 4:10 am

LCaulkins wrote: ↑January 15th, 2022, 3:31 pm If everybody would like to proof your name in the Cast List, here it is:

Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Figaro: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">Todd</a> 
Susan: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
Count Almaviva: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16463">Jake Malizia</a> 
Countess: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a> 
Marcelina: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15580">Joanna Mikal Hoyt</a> 
Doctor Bartholo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13706">Scott Caulkins</a> 
The Page Hannibal: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16384">Cindy Gorman</a> 
Basil: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a> 
Agnes: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16484">Therese Lindholm</a> 
Antonio: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16687">Ryan Williams</a> 
Don Guzman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordino</a> 
Bounce: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a> 
Servant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a> 
Crier of the Court: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13661">Lynette Caulkins</a> 
Doublefee: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15193">Tchaikovsky</a> 
Courier: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">Jim Hedrick</a>

This isn't important, but my middle name (I'm reading Marcelina) is spelled Michal not Mikal.
I'm looking forward to listening to the play...

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 16th, 2022, 4:59 am

JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑January 16th, 2022, 4:10 am This isn't important, but my middle name (I'm reading Marcelina) is spelled Michal not Mikal.
I'm looking forward to listening to the play...

Names are important

Fixed

Aligator · Post by **Aligator** » January 16th, 2022, 10:12 pm

LCaulkins wrote: ↑January 15th, 2022, 3:31 pm If everybody would like to proof your name in the Cast List, here it is:

Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Figaro: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">Todd</a> 
Susan: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
Count Almaviva: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16463">Jake Malizia</a> 
Countess: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a> 
Marcelina: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15580">Joanna Michal Hoyt</a> 
Doctor Bartholo: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13706">Scott Caulkins</a> 
The Page Hannibal: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16384">Cindy Gorman</a> 
Basil: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a> 
Agnes: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16484">Therese Lindholm</a> 
Antonio: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16687">Ryan Williams</a> 
Don Guzman: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordino</a> 
Bounce: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a> 
Servant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a> 
Crier of the Court: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13661">Lynette Caulkins</a> 
Doublefee: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15193">Tchaikovsky</a> 
Courier: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">Jim Hedrick</a>

All good for me, Lynette.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 17th, 2022, 9:18 am

Alright! Act 5 is wonderful! Everyone played their part to perfection and the editing was great

Just two very picky suggestions on volume:

12:36- stage directions sound slightly louder than the surrounding dialogue
17:43- I think the "Hem" could be even a little louder

*Edit to add: for some strange reason I can't access the project to change the status to "See PL Notes"*

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » January 17th, 2022, 10:14 am

jennlea wrote: ↑January 17th, 2022, 9:18 am Alright! Act 5 is wonderful! Everyone played their part to perfection and the editing was great

Just two very picky suggestions on volume:

12:36- stage directions sound slightly louder than the surrounding dialogue
17:43- I think the "Hem" could be even a little louder

*Edit to add: for some strange reason I can't access the project to change the status to "See PL Notes"*

I keep having trouble getting into MW admin, too, today.

Thank you so much for your time and careful attention! I've tweaked these two places, and Act 5 is ready for Spot PL