COMPLETE[PLAY] The Cenci by Shelley - thw

[jakemalizia]

I don't know if you've ever played a game called Skyrim, but your voice immediately made me think of some really cool character who would be in the Thieves Guild

Funny you should mention that - I actually used to be an adventurer like you. Then I took an arrow in the knee...

10/10 for that joke

[SanarikMoirangthem]

Hello,
I've uploaded the part of "Judge", please check it.
And here's the link:https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3
Thank you

[jakemalizia]

Hello,
I've uploaded the part of "Judge", please check it.
And here's the link:https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3
Thank you

Thanks!

Just at about 1:45 it sounds like you cut the sentence short: "...with such keen tortures". It sounds like it's cut off before the end of the word "tortures". Do you mind just doing that one line again? (it's on p.81 of the text)

Everything else is great

[SanarikMoirangthem]

Hello,
I've uploaded the part of "Judge", please check it.
And here's the link:https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3
Thank you

Thanks!

Just at about 1:45 it sounds like you cut the sentence short: "...with such keen tortures". It sounds like it's cut off before the end of the word "tortures". Do you mind just doing that one line again? (it's on p.81 of the text)

Everything else is great

Thank you.
I've uploaded that line separately again and named it same as the previous file, will it be fine?
And here's the link : https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3

[jakemalizia]

Hello,
I've uploaded the part of "Judge", please check it.
And here's the link:https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3
Thank you

Thanks!

Just at about 1:45 it sounds like you cut the sentence short: "...with such keen tortures". It sounds like it's cut off before the end of the word "tortures". Do you mind just doing that one line again? (it's on p.81 of the text)

Everything else is great

Thank you.
I've uploaded that line separately again and named it same as the previous file, will it be fine?
And here's the link : https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3

Thanks. Just so you know, in other circumstances this might not be fine - because when you reupload something with the same filename, it overwrites the previous version of the file. But luckily I still have your previous version downloaded, so I can add it to that, so it's fine in this instance!

I will sort this out in editing, but just be aware for future projects you might be asked to do some noise cleaning on your audios, because I can hear quite a lot of background noise. Particularly birds, as lovely as they are .

You're all PL ok for this project!

[SanarikMoirangthem]

Thanks!

Just at about 1:45 it sounds like you cut the sentence short: "...with such keen tortures". It sounds like it's cut off before the end of the word "tortures". Do you mind just doing that one line again? (it's on p.81 of the text)

Everything else is great

Thank you.
I've uploaded that line separately again and named it same as the previous file, will it be fine?
And here's the link : https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_judge_5.mp3

Thanks. Just so you know, in other circumstances this might not be fine - because when you reupload something with the same filename, it overwrites the previous version of the file. But luckily I still have your previous version downloaded, so I can add it to that, so it's fine in this instance!

I will sort this out in editing, but just be aware for future projects you might be asked to do some noise cleaning on your audios, because I can hear quite a lot of background noise. Particularly birds, as lovely as they are .

You're all PL ok for this project!

Thank you so much. I will surely keep those in mind.

[jakemalizia]

Act 2 is edited and ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_2_shelley_128kb.mp3

Am I supposed to do something different with the MW for act files?

[jakemalizia]

Here also is Act 3, ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_3_shelley_128kb.mp3 - 32:32

[Kitty]

Am I supposed to do something different with the MW for act files?

no just put in the normal link to the file. I will PL it tomorrow and give you feedback.

The only other thing you still need to do is put in all the reader names into the section of the acts in which they appear. That will be their finished credit for this project, since the other part-files will be deleted.

And then you need to prepare a cast list. You may already have seen Todd post them at the end of his projects, so you can take a copy/paste template from there.

Sonia

[alanmapstone]

Hi Jake
If it would help get this finished I could do the few lines of the Officer in acts 4 & 5.

[jakemalizia]

Hi Jake
If it would help get this finished I could do the few lines of the Officer in acts 4 & 5.

That would be nice, thanks
If it can contrast somewhat to your other part, that would be great

[alanmapstone]

Officer

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_officer_4.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_officer_5.mp3

[jakemalizia]

Officer

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_officer_4.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_officer_5.mp3

Nicely done - thanks, all PL ok!

[jakemalizia]

I'll do Andrea to finish this up. He only has 3 lines, I believe.
Now we are fully subscribed and near the end!

[Kitty]

Act 2 is edited and ready for PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/cenci_2_shelley_128kb.mp3

just had a listen to Act 2 and we all sound great together. What drama, and Cenci sounds so evil no wonder they are all trembling before him.

I have a couple of PL notes for you Jake, but on the whole it was splendidly stitched together, the pacing was good:

> at 8:23: (p. 26) "Cenci, aside" – it's best to include the name of the character here, since the stage directions right before mention Beatrice and Bernardo, so it is as if this is now again the first line of Cenci

> at 19:05: (p. 30) "and we trust imagination" – Adrian said "and we trust not imagination" which changes the meaning of the statement. You could try cutting out the "not", and if that doesn't sound good, maybe Adrian could re-do this one line ? In case he is not bookmarked to the thread anymore, you may contact him by PM to make sure he sees the note.

And I moved the files from Act 2 now to under "Files to be deleted". You could do that for the next finished acts as well, so they are out of the way.

Thanks, on to the next act...

Sonia