benrocampo29 wrote: ↑November 26th, 2021, 5:34 pm
Hi! I can PL Section 14,15,17,18,19, and 20! Ill have them done tonight!
I would so greatly appreciate that
If you would follow along with the script and make sure no lines are missing that would be fabulous. Of course, you may already know this if you’ve PL’d a play before, but I thought I’d mention it
Section 14: PLOK
- I followed thru the text and did not run into any issues. She didnt miss a single stage direction! very nicely read
Section 15: Possible errors
- A little slow for my personal preference (some energetic scenes need more umph), but it definitely helped with any "difficult" words.
- There was not a lot of silence time at the start, but considering you only ask for .5-1sec it might be ok.
Section 17: PLOK
- Made for a great listen! Loved the enthusiasm!
Section 18: PLOK
Section 19: PLOK
- LOVEDDDDDD the voice! great read!
Section 20: One small thing
- Loved the enthusiasm and the obvious effort put into the reading! However, I noticed that at the beginning of both this reading and section 19 you introduced your character and your name. I dont know if this is a problem, but the other sections I PLd didnt do it (assuming they read multiple sections) so I thought I would mention it. Easy fix though!
Overall, any errors are easy fixes, I followed through the text and didnt find any errors that would change the meaning/direction of the text, and I dont believe any lines were missed! All the readers did a great job!
benrocampo29 wrote: ↑November 26th, 2021, 6:28 pmSection 15: Possible errors
- A little slow for my personal preference (some energetic scenes need more umph), but it definitely helped with any "difficult" words.
- There was not a lot of silence time at the start, but considering you only ask for .5-1sec it might be ok.
Section 20: One small thing
- Loved the enthusiasm and the obvious effort put into the reading! However, I noticed that at the beginning of both this reading and section 19 you introduced your character and your name. I dont know if this is a problem, but the other sections I PLd didnt do it (assuming they read multiple sections) so I thought I would mention it. Easy fix though!
Overall, any errors are easy fixes, I followed through the text and didnt find any errors that would change the meaning/direction of the text, and I dont believe any lines were missed! All the readers did a great job!
Wow you were quick! Thank you! I've reviewed your notes and will mark them all PL-OK!
In regards to your notes on Sections 15 and 20-
Section 15: I leave all performance styles up to each reader. The silence at the beginning is fine cause I'll be taking apart each file and putting it into a master file.
Section 20: Some readers will say their voice credits in all acts and that is totally fine. I'll just cut out the ones I don't need.