[COMPLETE]Mice and Men by Madeleine Lucette Ryley-mtf

[jennlea]

Hi! I can PL Section 14,15,17,18,19, and 20! Ill have them done tonight!

I would so greatly appreciate that

If you would follow along with the script and make sure no lines are missing that would be fabulous. Of course, you may already know this if you’ve PL’d a play before, but I thought I’d mention it

[jennlea]

Stage Directions, Act 3
TrLove

Section 13

-0.5-1 second of silence at intro
-no background noise/pauses
-recording is perfect not too loud/quiet
-no repeats

End: 5 seconds of silence at end

Thank you so very much for helping out!

[benrocampo29]

Section 14: PLOK
- I followed thru the text and did not run into any issues. She didnt miss a single stage direction! very nicely read

Section 15: Possible errors
- A little slow for my personal preference (some energetic scenes need more umph), but it definitely helped with any "difficult" words.
- There was not a lot of silence time at the start, but considering you only ask for .5-1sec it might be ok.

Section 17: PLOK
- Made for a great listen! Loved the enthusiasm!

Section 18: PLOK


Section 19: PLOK
- LOVEDDDDDD the voice! great read!


Section 20: One small thing
- Loved the enthusiasm and the obvious effort put into the reading! However, I noticed that at the beginning of both this reading and section 19 you introduced your character and your name. I dont know if this is a problem, but the other sections I PLd didnt do it (assuming they read multiple sections) so I thought I would mention it. Easy fix though!


Overall, any errors are easy fixes, I followed through the text and didnt find any errors that would change the meaning/direction of the text, and I dont believe any lines were missed! All the readers did a great job!

[jennlea]

Section 15: Possible errors
- A little slow for my personal preference (some energetic scenes need more umph), but it definitely helped with any "difficult" words.
- There was not a lot of silence time at the start, but considering you only ask for .5-1sec it might be ok.



Section 20: One small thing
- Loved the enthusiasm and the obvious effort put into the reading! However, I noticed that at the beginning of both this reading and section 19 you introduced your character and your name. I dont know if this is a problem, but the other sections I PLd didnt do it (assuming they read multiple sections) so I thought I would mention it. Easy fix though!


Overall, any errors are easy fixes, I followed through the text and didnt find any errors that would change the meaning/direction of the text, and I dont believe any lines were missed! All the readers did a great job!

Wow you were quick! Thank you! I've reviewed your notes and will mark them all PL-OK!

In regards to your notes on Sections 15 and 20-
Section 15: I leave all performance styles up to each reader. The silence at the beginning is fine cause I'll be taking apart each file and putting it into a master file.
Section 20: Some readers will say their voice credits in all acts and that is totally fine. I'll just cut out the ones I don't need.

Thank you again for your time and effort on these

[jennlea]

Here's Mrs. Deborah.

Act 1, 2:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_mrsdeborah_1.mp3

Act 2, 6:03
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_mrsdeborah_2.mp3

Act 4, 5:52
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_mrsdeborah_4.mp3

What a delightful play this is!

Thank you, Joanna! These have been PL'd and Acts 2 and 4 are PL-OK!

Act 1 Note:
-For the voice credit can you add "Embury's housekeeper" so it matches what is in the MW?

[jennlea]

Here's Act 1 for Peter:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_peter_1.mp3 2:15

Thank you, David! This has been marked PL-OK!

[jennlea]

Here are Stage Directions for Act 3, duration 29:05.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_stagedirections_3.mp3

Tina

Here are Stage Directions for Act 4, duration 18:25.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_stagedirections_4.mp3

Tina

These have been marked PL-OK!

Thank you again for your lovely Stage Directions!

[jennlea]

Here is Kit. I'm also dancing, bowing, and playing a mean air-fiddle, but you won't be able to hear that.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_kitbarniger_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_kitbarniger_3.mp3

(Each just over a minute.)

Thanks, Todd

Thank you, Fiddler Todd! These have been marked as PL-OK!

[TrLove]

Here are Stage Directions for Act 3, duration 29:05.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_stagedirections_3.mp3

Tina

Here are Stage Directions for Act 4, duration 18:25.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_stagedirections_4.mp3

Tina

These have been marked PL-OK!

Thank you again for your lovely Stage Directions!

You’re very welcome! What a crew you have on hand to help, that’s a great idea.
T

[JoannaHoyt]

Act 1 Note:
-For the voice credit can you add "Embury's housekeeper" so it matches what is in the MW?

Sorry... I know better than that by now. Here's Mrs. Deborah Act 1 with full voice credit included. 2.11
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_mrsdeborah_1.mp3

[jennlea]

Sorry... I know better than that by now. Here's Mrs. Deborah Act 1 with full voice credit included. 2.11
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_mrsdeborah_1.mp3

All perfectly PL-OK! Thank you!

[alanmapstone]

Sir Harry act 3

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_sirharry_3.mp3

[marissa27]

Stage Directions, Act 3
TrLove

Section 13

-0.5-1 second of silence at intro
-no background noise/pauses
-recording is perfect not too loud/quiet
-no repeats

End: 5 seconds of silence at end

Thank you so very much for helping out!

You are so welcome, I am glad you accepted my help! These other projects will not!

[sonofcoltas]

Lovell act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_lovell_1.mp3 09:57

[jennlea]

Lovell act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/miceandmen_lovell_1.mp3 09:57

Thank you! Got it in the MW for PLing