COMPLETE[PLAY]Stichus by Plautus - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » November 20th, 2021, 4:47 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 20th, 2021, 1:34 pm

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑November 19th, 2021, 1:44 pmHere is Epignomus, Act 4:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_epignomus_4.mp3

thank you, Jim, this is perfectly PL ok, including the voice credit

and oh ! you are being so nasty to Gelasimus

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » November 20th, 2021, 1:36 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑November 19th, 2021, 9:47 pmCorrections made:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_stage_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_stage_5.mp3

thank you for the quick edits, perfectly done and PL ok now

Now we only need a Sagarinus

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » November 20th, 2021, 9:59 pm

He is an obnoxious bore! Thanks for your support. Jim

JulieB3 · Post by **JulieB3** » November 21st, 2021, 6:26 am

I'll take Sagarinus if you'd like. I'll do my best to get it to you no later than next Sunday.

This is going to be so much fun.

Post by **ToddHW** » November 21st, 2021, 9:24 am

Thank you. And now we are full.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 21st, 2021, 1:34 pm

Assembled as much as possible for now.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 21st, 2021, 6:47 pm

Acts 1, 2, 3, and 4 are ready for final PL. Great voices!

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 22nd, 2021, 3:46 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑November 21st, 2021, 6:47 pmActs 1, 2, 3, and 4 are ready for final PL. Great voices!

I agree, it all sounds excellent and perfect editing as well

I enjoyed each and every short dialogue. Well done all !

Acts 2, 3 and 4 straight PL ok.

Act 1 I'll leave pending to wait for the last voice credit:

> at 1:04: voice credit for Sagarinus missing

I listened to the act and there are no errors there either.

Thank you

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 22nd, 2021, 5:08 am

Oh, yes, of course that voice credit is missing - I should have said so in advance. It was such a pleasure not having intertwined stage directions before every line and hour long acts as I have been seeing in other stuff the last few months that I just got swept along....

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 22nd, 2021, 8:56 am

Here's my draft of cast list. It formats differently on the catalog pages.

 Cast list: 
Antipho, an old gentleman of Athens: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 
Epignomus, brother of Pamphilus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10801">Jim Locke</a> 
Pamphilus, brother of Epignomus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a> 
Gelasimus, a Parasite: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8011">Greg Giordano</a> 
Stichus, the servant of Epignomus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a> 
Sagarinus, the servant of Pamphilus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13776">Julie Burks</a> 
Pinacium, a boy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13851">Ethan Hurst</a> 
Philumena, the wife of Epignomus: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a> 
Pamphila, the wife of Pamphilus and sister of Philumena: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16239">Nissy</a> 
Crocotium, a female servant of Philumena: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a> 
Stephanium, a female kitchen servant of Pamphila: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzHiller</a> 
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8425">Larry Wilson</a> 
Editing: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a> 

Thanks, Todd

JulieB3 · Post by **JulieB3** » November 27th, 2021, 3:39 pm

Here is Sagarinus. Any notes you have would be welcome. I hope you enjoy it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_sagarinus_5.mp3 7:17

Post by **Kitty** » November 29th, 2021, 5:14 am

JulieB3 wrote: ↑November 27th, 2021, 3:39 pmHere is Sagarinus. Any notes you have would be welcome. I hope you enjoy it. https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_sagarinus_5.mp3

excellent, Julie, I had a hunch you would enjoy acting out

Your characterization of Sagarinus is lively done, it will sound great together in dialogue with Alan.

And thank you for the fast return now so close to the end.

I do have a few small notes for correction still:

> at 4:28: (p. 250) "there shall be no skulking in me" – you say "sulking

> at 4:45: (p. 250) missed line: "But to me, indeed, most charming." – instead you recorded Stichus' lines, starting with "Make us jovial...." you can cut out that quote

> at 6:15: (p. 251) between" Take it, you" and "in the meantime" – could you leave a bit more silent space here for Todd's editing cuts ? Your speech is interrupted by stage directions at the point, we also need to leave 2-3 seconds of silence in that case

> at 6:59: (p. 252) between "both in the same step" and "I challenge all" – same here, a bit more space would be helpful

thanks, and I hope we will hear you in further plays from now on

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 29th, 2021, 8:05 am

Act 1 ready for Spot PL - added Sagarinus voice credit at 1:03

Thanks, Todd

JulieB3 · Post by **JulieB3** » November 29th, 2021, 7:15 pm

Take Two! I hope it's okay this time.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/stichus_sagarinus_5.mp3 7:7

I will definitely be looking through the open plays.