FULL[PLAY]Wives on Strike by Lillian Sutton Pelée-mtf

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jennlea
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Post by jennlea » June 14th, 2021, 7:16 am

Thank you!
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Post by jennlea » June 16th, 2021, 7:44 pm

Lovely job with Clara!

Act 1 is PL-OK!

Act 2 Notes:
There are 3 lines on page 38 that need to be added at the beginning of your file:
-"Oh, Mr. Winburn, I didn't know you were here."
-"Oh, so funny!"
-"Thanks, but I can't stay.  I didn't know you had company.  Mother made a cake this afternoon and sent some over."

Act 3 Note:
~5:05 missing "Oh, gracious!" (page 69)
-Jenn B.
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Post by jennlea » June 20th, 2021, 7:34 pm

sonofcoltas wrote:
June 11th, 2021, 1:21 pm
uploaded Thorton Albright act 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_thorntonalbright_2.mp3
Wonderful job with Thornton, though I do have to wonder why Betty was singing his praises in Act 1 after hearing him in this Act!

I have just a few corrections for you:
-0:00 for the voice credit can you please say "Thornton Albright, her husband, an architect..." so that it matches what is in the Magic Window
-0:22 missing "Say, Betty, do you know what time it is?" (pg 27, hidden among all those stage directions)
-10:05 missing "Yes, do stay." (pg 38, last line)
-Jenn B.
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Post by jennlea » June 20th, 2021, 7:36 pm

WendyKatzHiller wrote:
June 14th, 2021, 12:02 pm
Here's Jane's corrected Act 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_janespink_3.mp3

Thanks,
Wendy
Perfectly PL-OK! Thanks so much, Wendy!
-Jenn B.
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Post by jennlea » June 20th, 2021, 7:56 pm

feminerdist wrote:
June 12th, 2021, 6:33 pm
Patricia Duggan, Act 1 (10:29)
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_patriciaduggan_1.mp3
Great job voicing the president of the club! Act 1 is PL-OK!

Just a note for future parts...make sure to leave about 3-5 seconds of silence when there are stage directions in the middle of your lines. It makes it easier for the editor to get everything stitched together where there are clear visual spaces as to where each line starts and stops. No need to fix anything here though, just something to keep in mind for next time :)
-Jenn B.
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Post by sonofcoltas » June 21st, 2021, 8:44 am

jennlea wrote:
June 20th, 2021, 7:34 pm
sonofcoltas wrote:
June 11th, 2021, 1:21 pm
uploaded Thorton Albright act 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_thorntonalbright_2.mp3
Wonderful job with Thornton, though I do have to wonder why Betty was singing his praises in Act 1 after hearing him in this Act!

I have just a few corrections for you:
-0:00 for the voice credit can you please say "Thornton Albright, her husband, an architect..." so that it matches what is in the Magic Window
-0:22 missing "Say, Betty, do you know what time it is?" (pg 27, hidden among all those stage directions)
-10:05 missing "Yes, do stay." (pg 38, last line)
I agree with you on Thornton's character. It seems to me that Lily may not be the only vampire in the play :lol:

I uploaded https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/cyranodebergerac_christian_4.mp3 18:54 with the following corrections:
-0:00 for the voice credit can you please say "Thornton Albright, her husband, an architect..." so that it matches what is in the Magic Window
-0:22 missing "Say, Betty, do you know what time it is?" (pg 27, hidden among all those stage directions)

I held off on the correction:
-10:05 missing "Yes, do stay." (pg 38, last line)
because it is attributed to Reynold in the script and I just wanted to confirm that you wanted me to read that line.

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Post by jennlea » June 21st, 2021, 11:36 am

sonofcoltas wrote:
June 21st, 2021, 8:44 am
I agree with you on Thornton's character. It seems to me that Lily may not be the only vampire in the play :lol:

I uploaded https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/cyranodebergerac_christian_4.mp3 18:54 with the following corrections:
-0:00 for the voice credit can you please say "Thornton Albright, her husband, an architect..." so that it matches what is in the Magic Window
-0:22 missing "Say, Betty, do you know what time it is?" (pg 27, hidden among all those stage directions)

I held off on the correction:
-10:05 missing "Yes, do stay." (pg 38, last line)
because it is attributed to Reynold in the script and I just wanted to confirm that you wanted me to read that line.
Thank you! Thornton's Act 2 is now PL-OK! Looks like you posted the a different file link but no matter, the correct one is in the MW and is OK! Hoping to listen to your Act 3 this evening.

And you are totally correct about the line on page 38. It belongs to Reynold. Sorry about that :oops:
-Jenn B.
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Post by wib66 » June 21st, 2021, 2:32 pm

jennlea wrote:
June 16th, 2021, 7:44 pm
Lovely job with Clara!

Act 1 is PL-OK!

Act 2 Notes:
There are 3 lines on page 38 that need to be added at the beginning of your file:
-"Oh, Mr. Winburn, I didn't know you were here."
-"Oh, so funny!"
-"Thanks, but I can't stay.  I didn't know you had company.  Mother made a cake this afternoon and sent some over."

Act 3 Note:
~5:05 missing "Oh, gracious!" (page 69)
No problem will be the weekend now before I can get to them thanks

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Post by feminerdist » June 21st, 2021, 8:38 pm

jennlea wrote:
June 20th, 2021, 7:56 pm
feminerdist wrote:
June 12th, 2021, 6:33 pm
Patricia Duggan, Act 1 (10:29)
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_patriciaduggan_1.mp3
Great job voicing the president of the club! Act 1 is PL-OK!

Just a note for future parts...make sure to leave about 3-5 seconds of silence when there are stage directions in the middle of your lines. It makes it easier for the editor to get everything stitched together where there are clear visual spaces as to where each line starts and stops. No need to fix anything here though, just something to keep in mind for next time :)


Ah! Apologies. I thought I did that, but must have missed over the ones in the middle of a line. I guess I got caught up in it. I'll be more careful next time. :)

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Post by jennlea » June 22nd, 2021, 6:55 am

feminerdist wrote:
June 12th, 2021, 7:19 pm
And Patricia Duggan, Act 3 (5:51)
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_patriciaduggan_3.mp3
Another great act :clap:

Only one I found missing:
-5:31 missing "Oh, my moleskin coat!  Who proposed this strike anyway?" (bottom of page 72)
feminerdist wrote:
June 21st, 2021, 8:38 pm
Ah! Apologies. I thought I did that, but must have missed over the ones in the middle of a line. I guess I got caught up in it. I'll be more careful next time. :)
No worries! It was only in a few spots where there were stage directions in the middle. And trust me, me all get caught up in our parts sometimes :lol:
-Jenn B.
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Post by jennlea » June 22nd, 2021, 7:02 am

Another splendid job, Alan! Bob's Act 2 is PL-OK!
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Post by jennlea » June 22nd, 2021, 7:19 am

sonofcoltas wrote:
June 14th, 2021, 7:07 am
uploaded Thornton Albright act 3

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_thorntonalbright_3.mp3
Thank you! Great job again!

Just one small line to add:
-3:50 missing "Oh, never mind!  Give me the bill of fare that has the most on it and takes the longest time to eat." (pg 68)
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Post by alanmapstone » June 22nd, 2021, 7:50 am

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Post by feminerdist » June 22nd, 2021, 6:42 pm

jennlea wrote:
June 22nd, 2021, 6:55 am
feminerdist wrote:
June 12th, 2021, 7:19 pm
And Patricia Duggan, Act 3 (5:51)
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/wivesonstrike_patriciaduggan_3.mp3
Another great act :clap:

Only one I found missing:
-5:31 missing "Oh, my moleskin coat!  Who proposed this strike anyway?" (bottom of page 72)
Oh no! How should I fix that? record the line and add it in at the appropriate moment? Or add it in at the end?

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