ToddHW wrote: ↑
May 18th, 2021, 9:01 am
And here is Act 5. Ties it all together. Enjoy.
enjoy I did
What a cool and turbulent finale. Another brilliant performance and editing.
I would only suggest one correction at this spot:
> at 4:55
: maybe in this speech, we should put the persons spoken to at the beginning of each sentence
instead of after it, otherwise it's a bit confusing who should do what:
"Villers, to Letty
: You go and put off your conquering dress, and get all your awkward airs ready—
: And you practise a few groans —
to Mrs Racket
: And you—if possible—an air of gravity.
I'll answer for the plot."
the rest, perfect as always