OPEN[PLAY]Civil Service by Hare - thw

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Post by benderca » May 4th, 2021, 1:54 am

TrLove wrote:
April 24th, 2021, 11:34 am

Thanks for the lovely compliment! Here is the edited original, ready for spot checks. Please note that I altered the file name to add the "s" to stage directions, as well.

Tina
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_stagedirections_01_128kb.mp3
New length: 34:00
Thanks, Tina! Stage Directions Act 1 is now PL OK! Nicely done!

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Post by benderca » May 4th, 2021, 2:06 am

jennlea wrote:
May 3rd, 2021, 6:03 am
benderca wrote:
March 14th, 2021, 5:55 pm
I have one minor suggestion for Birdie, Act 2. Your pronunciation of "rural" sounds like "rule" and it might be confusing since you say it twice. It should be two syllables "rur-ral":
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/pronunciation/english/rural

1:38 He's a rural free deliverer, ain't he?
1:45 Does a rural free deliverer make enough money to git married on?

I'll let Todd decide if this is important enough to merit your attention. :D

Thanks,
TJ
I think Todd had mentioned it was OK to leave it as it, but I decided to fix it. Plus, it still says "See PL Notes" in the MW so I figured that was a sign I really did need to fix it :lol:

Anywho, I tried my best to pronounce it correctly while keeping the accent :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_birdie_2_128kb.mp3
lol! Yes, I think we did decide yours was an acceptable pronunciation -- I think I just forgot to change to PL OK. Ooops. Anyway, I reckon I like it this way bedder. It shore sounds more rurral to my rurral ears... :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thanks, Jenn, Act 2 is now PL OK!

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Post by benderca » May 4th, 2021, 2:21 am

alanmapstone wrote:
April 2nd, 2021, 3:37 am
Goldie act 3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_goldiewex_3.mp3

A happy ending?
Yes, definitely! A happy ending for all! :D

Wonderful job with Goldie, Alan -- Act 3 is PL OK!



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Post by ToddHW » May 4th, 2021, 5:48 am

Thank you for all the PL's! Much appreciated!

Todd

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Post by benderca » May 5th, 2021, 4:05 am

Just one tiny note for Act 3 as well. Kate is part of the "ALL" in this scene:

7:32 (p. 65):
All. Mrs. Jeffs!

Thanks, Availle!

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Post by benderca » May 5th, 2021, 4:05 am

Just one tiny note for Old R.F.D. Act 3.

Old R.F.D. is part of "ALL" in this scene:

3:48 (p. 65):
All. Mrs. Jeffs!

Thanks!
TJ

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Post by benderca » May 5th, 2021, 4:07 am

ToddHW wrote:
May 4th, 2021, 5:48 am
Thank you for all the PL's! Much appreciated!

Todd
You're very welcome! My pleasure.

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Post by ToddHW » May 5th, 2021, 5:45 am

benderca wrote:
May 5th, 2021, 4:05 am
Just one tiny note for Old R.F.D. Act 3.

Old R.F.D. is part of "ALL" in this scene:

3:48 (p. 65):
All. Mrs. Jeffs!

Thanks!
TJ
Fixed, ready for spot PL.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by benderca » May 5th, 2021, 7:52 am

ToddHW wrote:
May 5th, 2021, 5:45 am
benderca wrote:
May 5th, 2021, 4:05 am
Just one tiny note for Old R.F.D. Act 3.

Old R.F.D. is part of "ALL" in this scene:

3:48 (p. 65):
All. Mrs. Jeffs!

Thanks!
TJ
Fixed, ready for spot PL.

Thanks, Todd
I can't find the added line, Todd. Did you insert it around 3:48 after "Don't listen to him" and before "Trust in the Lord..."?

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_oldrfd_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by ToddHW » May 5th, 2021, 9:09 am

It is at 3:50. I hear it in the MW link you show above, after "Don't listen to him" and before "Trust in the Lord...".

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Availle » May 5th, 2021, 5:22 pm

Kate's acts are reuploaded. Thanks for PLing! :)
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Post by ToddHW » May 5th, 2021, 6:03 pm

Thank you.

Todd

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Post by benderca » May 7th, 2021, 9:41 am

ToddHW wrote:
May 5th, 2021, 9:09 am
It is at 3:50. I hear it in the MW link you show above, after "Don't listen to him" and before "Trust in the Lord...".

Thanks, Todd
That's so strange. I even refreshed my browser and it was not there. But it's there now, so... yay! Old RFD Act 3 is not PL OK!

Thanks, Todd!

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