~OPEN(play) Hay Fever by Noel Coward - thw

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WendyKatzHiller
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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 20th, 2021, 9:46 am

Lovely! Thanks. :)

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 20th, 2021, 10:16 am

Hello Wendy,
Here are the corrections for Simon Act 1. i added in a few seconds of silence between each of the lines, perhaps in some cases there is now too much space but I figure that is better than too little. I will do the same for the other two acts when I am doing those corrections.

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act1_128kb.mp3

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 20th, 2021, 10:20 am

Sorry I forgot to mention that the new file for Simon has a duration of 25:24 and passed ok through Checker.

Tchaikovsky

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 20th, 2021, 11:10 am

Thanks so much!

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 21st, 2021, 12:49 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 20th, 2021, 10:16 am
Hello Wendy,
Here are the corrections for Simon Act 1. i added in a few seconds of silence between each of the lines, perhaps in some cases there is now too much space but I figure that is better than too little. I will do the same for the other two acts when I am doing those corrections.

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act1_128kb.mp3
Thanks so much! PL OK now. For the next acts, please leave the five seconds for stage directions within lines as well.

I love your characterization of Simon! Your reading of the line "Not to people we like" sums him up perfectly! :D

Wendy

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 21st, 2021, 1:54 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 15th, 2021, 9:52 am
Hi Wendy,
Here are the complete files for Simon all run though checker.

file durations are:

Act 1 12:56
Act 2: 4:06
Act 3: 1:28

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act1_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act3_128kb.mp3
Act two continues your wonderful characterization of Simon! A few notes (other than adding the blank spaces):

~10 You're missing your first three lines "Who'll go out?", "No; you always. . .", and "Some one goes . . . "
~56 Cut "These games are much too brainy for me." It really belongs to Sandy. (Not your mistake, script error.)
~1:45 Cut "You haven't got. . ." which is Judith's line, and replace with "Oh Mother darling, do shut up."

Lovely job! Thanks, Wendy

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 21st, 2021, 2:15 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 15th, 2021, 9:52 am
Hi Wendy,
Here are the complete files for Simon all run though checker.

file durations are:

Act 1 12:56
Act 2: 4:06
Act 3: 1:28

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act1_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act3_128kb.mp3
Lovely job on Act 3 as well! Can't wait to get it all put together. Other than the spaces between lines, just one small change:

~53 missed line "You think you know such a lot. . . "

Thanks again for your wonderful work!
Wendy

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 21st, 2021, 2:31 pm

WendyKatzHiller wrote:
February 21st, 2021, 2:15 pm
Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 15th, 2021, 9:52 am
Hi Wendy,
Here are the complete files for Simon all run though checker.

file durations are:

Act 1 12:56
Act 2: 4:06
Act 3: 1:28

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act1_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act3_128kb.mp3
Lovely job on Act 3 as well! Can't wait to get it all put together. Other than the spaces between lines, just one small change:

~53 missed line "You think you know such a lot. . . "

Thanks again for your wonderful work!
Wendy
Thanks Wendy. i am glad you are pleased. I will start working on the others tomorrow.

Tchaikovsky

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Post by jvisi » February 21st, 2021, 2:50 pm

Hi Wendy,
I would be interested in taking Jackie if it's needed. You can list me as jvisi. Thanks!

Jvisi

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 21st, 2021, 2:57 pm

Absolutely! Welcome aboard. :D
Wendy

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 21st, 2021, 5:42 pm

Thanks! :clap:

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 23rd, 2021, 9:35 am

Here you are Mother... the corrections for Simon Act Two. Passed in Checker.

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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3 duration 6:12

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 23rd, 2021, 9:48 am

And Here are the corrections for Simon Act Three. Passed through Checker. This was so much fun to do. I didn't realize how much I would enjoy behaving like an UTTER TWIT.

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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act3_128kb.mp3 duration 6:12

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 9:55 am

Thanks! :clap:

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