OPEN[PLAY]Bacchides by Plautus - thw

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Post by Kitty » February 23rd, 2021, 5:24 am

Todd: I noticed there is a final speech apparently spoken by the entire cast. It's too long a text to merge I guess. Do you have a preference who speaks it ? Or will you let each of us speak one sentence ? Should I insist on everbody recording the speech so you have a choice ?

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Post by ToddHW » February 23rd, 2021, 5:27 am

Not only undone, but all done too (depending on Sonia's PL, of course).

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Post by ToddHW » February 23rd, 2021, 5:30 am

Kitty wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 5:24 am
Todd: I noticed there is a final speech apparently spoken by the entire cast. It's too long a text to merge I guess. Do you have a preference who speaks it ? Or will you let each of us speak one sentence ? Should I insist on everbody recording the speech so you have a choice ?

Sonia
Howsabout just The Twin Sisters?

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » February 23rd, 2021, 5:54 am

ToddHW wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 5:30 am
Howsabout just The Twin Sisters?
good idea !! You can even let each of us do part of the speech instead of merging it all. Best note it in the MW, so I won't forget.

Actually the speech fits very well to be spoken by the sisters.

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Post by Kitty » February 23rd, 2021, 5:58 am

:shock: I have just been witness to an old men being corrupted by desires :lol: All throughout he was so prim and upright and then in the end he succumbs after all. Wow, these Bacchides must have a rare talent with men ;) I will make sure to be extra seductive in my role.

An excellent job, I always had to smirk when you said you're undone. Lamenting your way through the play, I almost pity the guy because people will probably laugh at his misfortunes. Your dialogue with the other aged Athenian sharing your misfortunes (Alan) will be wonderful. :lol:

And you are not done yet (sorry). I found a few missed lines:

Act 2:

> at about 0:45: (p. 165) missed line: "Is he not come ?"
> at 1:05: (p. 165) "from his entertainer, Archidemides" – you say Archimedes here and the correct name later. Could you maybe say it the same way throughout the act ? so I suggest you correct this version

Act 4:

> at about 6:00: (p. 194) missed line: "Come, ask me."
> at about 7:37: (p. 198) please insert: "What's the matter ?"

Act 5:

> at 7:10: (p. 207) repeat "avaunt from me" – one version can be cut
> at about 7:55: (p. 208) two missed lines: "Certainly not – I won't – I don't care – let me alone, now." and "I had rather punish them both."
> at about 9:35: (p. 209) missed line: "How soon, in fact, we may be dead, d'ye mean ?"

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Post by Availle » February 23rd, 2021, 8:35 am

I think I'll make a perfect twin sister for Kitty - the good one and the evil one... :mrgreen:
What do you think?
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Post by ToddHW » February 23rd, 2021, 8:57 am

So long as I am not put in the position of having to decide which one is the good one and which one the bad one....

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 23rd, 2021, 11:32 am

Here are the corrections for the stage directions of Act 1. The new file length is 4:26

I will tackle the others for you tomorrow.

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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bacchides_stagedirections_act1_128kb.mp3

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Post by MManolakes » February 23rd, 2021, 11:56 am

I'll claim Pistoclerus, please.

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Post by adrianstephens » February 23rd, 2021, 12:07 pm

Kitty wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 5:58 am
adrianstephens wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 2:48 am
Oh, woe is me. I am undone.
And you are not done yet (sorry).
Thank you, Sonia. Take 2 follows:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bacchides_nicobulus_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bacchides_nicobulus_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bacchides_nicobulus_5.mp3


Act 2:

> at about 0:45: (p. 165) missed line: "Is he not come ?"
now 1:11 > at 1:05: (p. 165) "from his entertainer, Archidemides" – you say Archimedes here and the correct name later. Could you maybe say it the same way throughout the act ? so I suggest you correct this version

Act 4:

6:02 > at about 6:00: (p. 194) missed line: "Come, ask me."
now 7:45 > at about 7:37: (p. 198) please insert: "What's the matter ?"

Act 5:

> at 7:10: (p. 207) repeat "avaunt from me" – one version can be cut
7:58 > at about 7:55: (p. 208) two missed lines: "Certainly not – I won't – I don't care – let me alone, now." and "I had rather punish them both."
10:00 > at about 9:35: (p. 209) missed line: "How soon, in fact, we may be dead, d'ye mean ?"
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Post by Kitty » February 24th, 2021, 2:15 am

thank you, just one small missed bit still:

> at about 2:13: please also insert your own voice credit: "Stage directions, read by Tchaikovsky"

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Post by Kitty » February 24th, 2021, 2:17 am

thank you for the new time stamps. Some did change considerably :shock: and all is PL ok now :)

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Post by Kitty » February 24th, 2021, 2:19 am

Availle wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 8:35 am
I think I'll make a perfect twin sister for Kitty - the good one and the evil one... :mrgreen:
What do you think?
thank you for saving me from the experience of having Chris as my twin. :?

And I think we are both bad this time...or rather: the kind of bad that men love :lol: We'll have fun.

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