no ! keep it, I absolutely like this touch. With that name, Gabrielle may well be a sweet charming debutante from France, trying her luck on the London stage. She's a right little coquette, especially when she wants to get a car of her own
The accent is absolutely adorable and fitting here. Well done, Pauline. Looking forward to the next act.
Only here, you missed a few lines:
> at about 0:20
: please insert two lines missing: "Really? Oh, you are full of news.
" and "Oh, I’m all right, I s’pose. Isn’t it hot?
> at about 0:32
: you missed all the "ladies" lines. We may not use all the voices in all the choruses, but it would be good if Todd had a choice of voices to select from: "Many happy returns of the day!
" and "How d’ye do, Mr. Smythe?
" and "How are you, Carlton?
" and "Ha, ha, ha!