Brainworm Act 1 is PL ok now.ZamesCurran wrote: ↑October 8th, 2018, 8:40 pmAll caught up. Here's Brainworm, Act II:
For Act 2, I have two small notes to correct:
> at 7:01: “there is no ascent by desert in these days” – the way you stress it on the first syllable, it means this “sandy area”, but actually it should be stressed on the second syllable to mean “merit” in this context (the noun of the verb “to deserve sth good”)
> at 7:46: “I’ll but garter my hose” – you say “your hose” which is definitely not what he meant here
I liked the ending speech, you sound quite mischievous there.