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Post Posted:: February 12th, 2017, 2:32 am 

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Alain act 1 with missing letter!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_1.mp3

As I have just got my new laptop working, I am like a kid with a new toy, I want to play with it all the time.

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Post Posted:: February 12th, 2017, 2:41 am 

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alanmapstone wrote:
Alain act 1 with missing letter!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_1.mp3

As I have just got my new laptop working, I am like a kid with a new toy, I want to play with it all the time.


:lol: I can so understand this feeling. Well, have fun with your new toy. It's quite a good quality of sound too so you made a good purchase. :thumbs:

Act 1 definitely now PL ok. :)

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Post Posted:: February 15th, 2017, 8:52 am 

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Alain acts 2 & 3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_3.mp3

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Post Posted:: February 15th, 2017, 9:08 am 

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alanmapstone wrote:

thanks Alain ! :mrgreen: both already checked and PL ok. I love your explanation of jealous men.

Todd, Alan's interpretation of the "oh-oh" (0.21-0:23) which we have to say both, is completely different than mine (0:17-0:19). In fact, maybe his is more accurate to the scene. Should I re-do my line or do you think it sounds good nevertheless this way ?

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Post Posted:: February 15th, 2017, 7:59 pm 
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Kitty wrote:
alanmapstone wrote:

thanks Alain ! :mrgreen: both already checked and PL ok. I love your explanation of jealous men.

Todd, Alan's interpretation of the "oh-oh" (0.21-0:23) which we have to say both, is completely different than mine (0:17-0:19). In fact, maybe his is more accurate to the scene. Should I re-do my line or do you think it sounds good nevertheless this way ?

Sonia

Having the oh-oh different doesn't bother me. Your Georgette could be responding as frightened - OH-OH - while Alain is more amused - OH-oh. I may put them sequential rather than stacked one on top of the other when I edit.

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Post Posted:: February 16th, 2017, 12:46 am 

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Having the oh-oh different doesn't bother me. Your Georgette could be responding as frightened - OH-OH - while Alain is more amused - OH-oh. I may put them sequential rather than stacked one on top of the other when I edit.

ok that's actually a good idea. You're right, I think I made Georgette more frightened because of the things she says right after the oh-oh.

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Post Posted:: February 16th, 2017, 11:46 am 

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Kitty wrote:
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Having the oh-oh different doesn't bother me. Your Georgette could be responding as frightened - OH-OH - while Alain is more amused - OH-oh. I may put them sequential rather than stacked one on top of the other when I edit.

ok that's actually a good idea. You're right, I think I made Georgette more frightened because of the things she says right after the oh-oh.

Sonia


I agree that while Georgette finds their master's anger a bit frightening, Alain sees it as the sort of thing servants have to put up with and tries to pass it off. So I tried to make the 'Oh oh' and 'I am dying' lines sound exaggerated as though he is 'playing up' to the master's anger.

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Post Posted:: February 16th, 2017, 3:26 pm 
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Perfect from both of you!

I look forward to assembling this.

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Post Posted:: February 17th, 2017, 9:41 am 

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Alain acts 4 & 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_4.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_alain_5.mp3

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Post Posted:: February 17th, 2017, 10:32 am 
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Thanks.

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Post Posted:: February 17th, 2017, 12:07 pm 

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alanmapstone wrote:

no problems whatsoever with the two final acts. :) Alain PL ok. :thumbs:

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Post Posted:: March 2nd, 2017, 5:40 pm 

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ANd here's the Notary:


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/schoolforwives_notary_4.mp3 (3:11)

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Post Posted:: March 3rd, 2017, 1:53 am 

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ZamesCurran wrote:

thanks ! you made him right grovelling in the beginning, trying to please his client, but in the end he is highly indignated LOL works well :thumbs: no errors, so PL ok.

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