Looking For Some Critiques

BearCares · Post by **BearCares** » October 15th, 2012, 2:12 am

Hello, I've already tried the art sites but it's sometimes a bit difficult to get a critique from there. So I was wondering if you guys could help me out by telling me what things do you think I can do to improve this model? It's for that game I mentioned a while back. As a non gamer what is your reaction to it and what do you think is wrong with it? Thanks

catrose · Post by **catrose** » October 15th, 2012, 7:52 am

Colour?

Other than that, I think she looks quite nice!

RuthieG · Post by **RuthieG** » October 15th, 2012, 1:47 pm

I'm not sure that you will get much helpful input from us here, to be honest, as it isn't really our forte, but I'll try.

I think the modelling of her face is fine and delicate, the cheekbones and chin particularly. I find the nose possibly a little over-sculpted. She gives me the impression of quite an aristocratic or maybe Nordic appearance. Very symmetrical facial features. I think I see an odd blip in the centre of the lower lip, but that may just be the light.

Ruth

carolb · Post by **carolb** » October 15th, 2012, 2:07 pm

RuthieG wrote:I think I see an odd blip in the centre of the lower lip, but that may just be the light.

Looks like it could be a cold sore, poor girl!

I find the eyes rather creepy, but she has a certain elegance about her

Carol

CalmDragon · Post by **CalmDragon** » October 17th, 2012, 11:30 am

First thing I thought of was oh, you used Angelina Jolie as a model...

mmsmall · Post by **mmsmall** » October 23rd, 2012, 7:50 am

As one who has been an avid gamer, I find her to be extremely noble-looking. I love the nose, but I am particularly fond of strongly formed noses. I get tired of everyone wanting the "little turned up nose." I think she looks best in the middle portrait, any clothing she wears should always set off those lovely shoulders. No high necks for her!

That's my 2$ worth