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Here's the new upload:vmead wrote: ↑October 16th, 2021, 9:03 pmHi Ben,flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 15th, 2021, 1:48 pm Section 16:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_128kb.mp3
21:17
I'll wait until proofreading before recording section 17 in case I need to make adjustments to anything or redo something. Thanks
There's just a few things you'll want to edit and then this should be good to go.
First, you want to make sure to trim the beginning silence to between .5-1 second.
Next in the intro. you say "Section 16" as the section title, but here you would want to say, "A Matter of Interest: Part I" That's the part under title in the window (MW - magic window) on the first page that shows what you've been assigned.
At 3:48 you have a bit of a stumble on "...may probably..."
At 11:05 there's another stumble on "...every new book..."
Overall, great reading. I'm super intrigued about what's going to happen.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
I've made the suggested changes. Please let me know if there's anything else I need to tweak.
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Hi Ben, I have volunteered to be DPL. Great job on the recording and edits! You really captured the tongue-in-cheek humor of the dialogue! Just a little edit on the intro to meet the script on page 1 of this project:flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 7:34 amHere's the new upload:vmead wrote: ↑October 16th, 2021, 9:03 pmHi Ben,flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 15th, 2021, 1:48 pm Section 16:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_128kb.mp3
21:17
I'll wait until proofreading before recording section 17 in case I need to make adjustments to anything or redo something. Thanks
There's just a few things you'll want to edit and then this should be good to go.
First, you want to make sure to trim the beginning silence to between .5-1 second.
Next in the intro. you say "Section 16" as the section title, but here you would want to say, "A Matter of Interest: Part I" That's the part under title in the window (MW - magic window) on the first page that shows what you've been assigned.
At 3:48 you have a bit of a stumble on "...may probably..."
At 11:05 there's another stumble on "...every new book..."
Overall, great reading. I'm super intrigued about what's going to happen.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
I've made the suggested changes. Please let me know if there's anything else I need to tweak.
0:01 remove "A Matter of Interest, Part I" ; replace with "Section 16 of the Mystery of Choice" before "This is a Librivox recording ....
0:18 remove words "Section 16" insert " Part 1 after "A Matter of Interest"
Let me know if you have any questions.
Kind Regards,
Christine
Lol... the :01 change literally what I just changed in the previous edit... I can revert it back and change it at :18 though.brownrottger wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 9:27 amHi Ben, I have volunteered to be DPL. Great job on the recording and edits! You really captured the tongue-in-cheek humor of the dialogue! Just a little edit on the intro to meet the script on page 1 of this project:flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 7:34 amHere's the new upload:vmead wrote: ↑October 16th, 2021, 9:03 pm
Hi Ben,
There's just a few things you'll want to edit and then this should be good to go.
First, you want to make sure to trim the beginning silence to between .5-1 second.
Next in the intro. you say "Section 16" as the section title, but here you would want to say, "A Matter of Interest: Part I" That's the part under title in the window (MW - magic window) on the first page that shows what you've been assigned.
At 3:48 you have a bit of a stumble on "...may probably..."
At 11:05 there's another stumble on "...every new book..."
Overall, great reading. I'm super intrigued about what's going to happen.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
I've made the suggested changes. Please let me know if there's anything else I need to tweak.
0:01 remove "A Matter of Interest, Part I" ; replace with "Section 16 of the Mystery of Choice" before "This is a Librivox recording ....
0:18 remove words "Section 16" insert " Part 1 after "A Matter of Interest"
Let me know if you have any questions.
Kind Regards,
Christine
Here's the updated one:flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 10:30 amLol... the :01 change literally what I just changed in the previous edit... I can revert it back and change it at :18 though.brownrottger wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 9:27 amHi Ben, I have volunteered to be DPL. Great job on the recording and edits! You really captured the tongue-in-cheek humor of the dialogue! Just a little edit on the intro to meet the script on page 1 of this project:flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 7:34 am
Here's the new upload:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
I've made the suggested changes. Please let me know if there's anything else I need to tweak.
0:01 remove "A Matter of Interest, Part I" ; replace with "Section 16 of the Mystery of Choice" before "This is a Librivox recording ....
0:18 remove words "Section 16" insert " Part 1 after "A Matter of Interest"
Let me know if you have any questions.
Kind Regards,
Christine
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
Sorry Ben! That was my bad. I should have been more clear in my edit suggestion I was trying to say that you didn’t need to repeat “section 16” at .18. I should have put a time stamp for clarity.
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Brownrottger is updated as DPL now.
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Section 16 is PL Ok!flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 10:42 amHere's the updated one:flavo5000 wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 10:30 amLol... the :01 change literally what I just changed in the previous edit... I can revert it back and change it at :18 though.brownrottger wrote: ↑October 18th, 2021, 9:27 am
Hi Ben, I have volunteered to be DPL. Great job on the recording and edits! You really captured the tongue-in-cheek humor of the dialogue! Just a little edit on the intro to meet the script on page 1 of this project:
0:01 remove "A Matter of Interest, Part I" ; replace with "Section 16 of the Mystery of Choice" before "This is a Librivox recording ....
0:18 remove words "Section 16" insert " Part 1 after "A Matter of Interest"
Let me know if you have any questions.
Kind Regards,
Christine
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_16_chambers_128kb.mp3
Hi there. I would like to claim section 19. However I need some guidance on what to say at the beginning and end with regard to the titles. Should I start by stating section 19 part 4 & 5 or say part 4 separately prior to reading it? I have a similar dilemma finishing section 18. Do I repeat the section number at the end, the part number, or both?
Many thanks.
Many thanks.
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I'll put you in for 19.dustman33 wrote: ↑October 22nd, 2021, 7:12 am Hi there. I would like to claim section 19. However I need some guidance on what to say at the beginning and end with regard to the titles. Should I start by stating section 19 part 4 & 5 or say part 4 separately prior to reading it? I have a similar dilemma finishing section 18. Do I repeat the section number at the end, the part number, or both?
Many thanks.
So I would state the intro as follows:
"Section 19 of The Mystery Of Choice. This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information or to volunteer, please visit librivox.org." [Optional: "Read by your name."] "The Mystery Of Choice, by Robert W. Chambers. A Matter of Interest: Parts IV & V"
Then the next thing I would say would be "4 Dinner was ended." Then when you get to part 5, just say "5" and start that part.
When finishing you'll just want to say, "End of section 19" and then for 18, "End of section 18."
Let me know if I made sense!
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Lovely reading! PL OK.brownrottger wrote: ↑October 22nd, 2021, 8:49 am Section 4 9:14 https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/mysteryofchoice_04_chambers_128kb.mp3
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