[COMPLETE] 1 Corinthians, Young's Literal Translation - tg

tiwo007 · Post by **tiwo007** » September 25th, 2021, 12:33 pm

I remember that area, kind of close to the Burnsville Mall. I worked for several years on 42 heading down to Cedar at the Perkins over there. Thanks for The trip down memory Lane.
Tiwo

tiwo007 · Post by **tiwo007** » September 25th, 2021, 10:37 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_06_ylt_128kb.mp3
03:56

Post by **TriciaG** » September 26th, 2021, 5:16 am

Thank you! I'll PL later this evening.

yourbookvoice · Post by **yourbookvoice** » September 26th, 2021, 5:20 pm

Here's Chapter 12 at 5m 36s.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_12_kla_128kb.mp3
I sure enjoyed this.
Kerry Adams
Your Book Voice

Post by **TriciaG** » September 26th, 2021, 5:32 pm

Thanks! PL coming up...

Chapter 6: nicely read! One PL note:

1:41 (vs 9) - "that the unrighteous the reign of God shall not inherit" - I hear "unrighteousness"

A bit of constructive criticism: The pacing of your sentences are great! But it seems like the pauses between paragraphs, and sometimes sentences, is really rushed. Did you cut some of the silences down? (You don't need to do anything about this on this recording, unless you want to. It's more for future reference.)

tiwo007 · Post by **tiwo007** » September 26th, 2021, 5:37 pm

Thank ill fix this. Yeah, I cut some pauses.. but ill leave them in be next chapter.
Tiwo

Post by **TriciaG** » September 26th, 2021, 5:39 pm

Chapter 12: PL OK - nicely done, thanks!

(FYI, that "ylt" in the file name is "young's literal translation" in initials. Next time, please don't replace this with your initials.

I will easily fix this one at cataloging time.)

Post by **TriciaG** » September 26th, 2021, 5:40 pm

tiwo007 wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:37 pm Thank ill fix this. Yeah, I cut some pauses.. but ill leave them in be next chapter.
Tiwo

yourbookvoice · Post by **yourbookvoice** » September 26th, 2021, 10:38 pm

TriciaG wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:39 pm Chapter 12: PL OK - nicely done, thanks!

(FYI, that "ylt" in the file name is "young's literal translation" in initials. Next time, please don't replace this with your initials. I will easily fix this one at cataloging time.)

My "WHOOPS" sorry for the inconvenience.

I really do know better...
Thanks for making the file name correction. I'll make sure it doesn't happen again. (I hope...

)
KLA ... there I go again

Kerry Adams

tiwo007 · Post by **tiwo007** » September 27th, 2021, 5:45 pm

TriciaG wrote: ↑September 26th, 2021, 5:32 pm Thanks! PL coming up...

Chapter 6: nicely read! One PL note:

1:41 (vs 9) - "that the unrighteous the reign of God shall not inherit" - I hear "unrighteousness"

A bit of constructive criticism: The pacing of your sentences are great! But it seems like the pauses between paragraphs, and sometimes sentences, is really rushed. Did you cut some of the silences down? (You don't need to do anything about this on this recording, unless you want to. It's more for future reference.)

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_06_ylt_128kb.mp3

Post by **TriciaG** » September 27th, 2021, 6:07 pm

Thanks! PL OK

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 28th, 2021, 9:45 pm

Here are the corrected files.

Thanks for keeping me on track.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_01_ylt_128kb.mp3 4:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_02_ylt_128kb.mp3 2:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_03_ylt_128kb.mp3 3:22

Post by **TriciaG** » September 29th, 2021, 9:37 am

1-3 spot PL OK. Thanks!

Bruce0McFadden · Post by **Bruce0McFadden** » September 29th, 2021, 7:06 pm

I claim Chapters 10, 11, and 16.

Bruce0McFadden

tiwo007 · Post by **tiwo007** » September 29th, 2021, 9:32 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/firstcorinthians_07_ylt_128kb.mp3 07:58
Thanks