COMPLETE: Love's Coming-of-Age: A Series of Papers on the Relations of the Sexes by Edward Carpenter -jo

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For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

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Hi

Here Is section 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_09_carpenter_128kb.mp3

let me know if it is ok. if it is, can I claim section 11 please?

Thanks,

Susan Russell
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SuesUK wrote: September 24th, 2021, 3:47 pm Hi

Here Is section 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_09_carpenter_128kb.mp3

let me know if it is ok. if it is, can I claim section 11 please?

Thanks,

Susan Russell
Thank you for section 9! It sounds great. I have just a few notes:

- At 0:48, "'brothers' or friends," it seems that the end of "friends" is cut off a little bit.
- At 0:55, "state of society," I hear "sight of society."
- At 0:57, "parentage would be very uncertain," you say "percentage would be very uncertain."
- At 1:11, "Marx and Engels," I hear "Marx and Eagles."
- At 4:05, "were intermixed," the last syllable of "intermixed" falls below an audible level.

I also wanted to mention that starting at around 4:33 to the end, I hear some low knocking sounds. I don't think they're loud enough to distract the listener, so you don't need to change anything about that part of the recording, but I wanted to let you know so that you can keep it in mind for future recordings and be on the lookout for what might be causing it.

You might know about this already, but I'll mention just in case that, if you get a note on a recording, it doesn't mean you have to record the whole thing over again! :) Here's a brief tutorial on replacing words that you might find helpful.

Feel free to ask if you have questions about anything!

I went ahead and signed you up for section 11. Thank you for claiming!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Thanks, I will work on it 👍
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I would like section 12
On Preventive Checks to Population
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Ryanwill4 wrote: September 25th, 2021, 7:20 am I would like section 12
On Preventive Checks to Population
It's all yours! Thank you for claiming! That makes this project fully subscribed.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Wow, that was fast! Thank you for this section! It sounds great. I have just two notes:

- At 2:10, "preventatives to conception," you say "preventatives to contraception."
- At 5:43, "there is hope," you say "there is no hope."
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

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Good catches!

I have re-recorded to fix those two errors.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_12_carpenter_128kb.mp3

Let me know if it needs more work.

thanks

Ryan
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Ryanwill4 wrote: September 25th, 2021, 3:19 pm Good catches!

I have re-recorded to fix those two errors.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_12_carpenter_128kb.mp3

Let me know if it needs more work.

thanks

Ryan
PL OK! Thank you!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

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Hi

I have re done section 9 , I know I could just edit the original but wanted it to flow nicely. Also still working on the old editing skills :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_09_carpenter_128.mp3

Thanks

Sue
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SuesUK wrote: September 25th, 2021, 3:56 pm Hi

I have re done section 9 , I know I could just edit the original but wanted it to flow nicely. Also still working on the old editing skills :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/lovescomingofage_09_carpenter_128.mp3

Thanks

Sue
Thank you! There's just one small change to make, but it doesn't involve recording: could you add "kb" to the end of the filename so that it's lovescomingofage_09_carpenter_128kb? After that, you'll be all set!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Yh no problem, will do it tommorow 👍

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