Complete-GROUP: Pray You, Sir, Whose Daughter? by Helen H. Gardener-ag

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » August 26th, 2021, 4:39 pm

ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 26th, 2021, 11:46 am https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:59

Section 13 is ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin

Thank you for section 13 and another quick turnaround! The chapter sounds great. I have just one note: at 5:44, "appease the consciences," you say "appease the consciousness."

ComfortKC · Post by **ComfortKC** » August 27th, 2021, 10:17 am

Scarbo wrote: ↑August 26th, 2021, 4:39 pm
ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 26th, 2021, 11:46 am https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:59

Section 13 is ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin
Thank you for section 13 and another quick turnaround! The chapter sounds great. I have just one note: at 5:44, "appease the consciences," you say "appease the consciousness."

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:58

Attached is the revised file. Thanks.

Kevin

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » August 27th, 2021, 2:39 pm

ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 27th, 2021, 10:17 am https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:58

Attached is the revised file. Thanks.

Kevin

PL OK! Thank you!

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » August 30th, 2021, 8:17 am

Hi,

I claimed chapter 2. Apologies for the delay, may i have an extension?

Cedric.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » August 30th, 2021, 2:07 pm

Cedricwn wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 8:17 am Hi,

I claimed chapter 2. Apologies for the delay, may i have an extension?

Cedric.

Sure thing! Would a month work for you?

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » August 30th, 2021, 3:16 pm

Absolutely.

Thank you!

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » September 5th, 2021, 12:59 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
08:25
Chapter 2 is ready for review.

Cedric

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » September 5th, 2021, 1:56 pm

Cedricwn wrote: ↑September 5th, 2021, 12:59 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
08:25
Chapter 2 is ready for review.

Cedric

Thank you for chapter 2! This is a very nicely done first reading! I have just a few notes:

- At 5:27, "They had reached the portiere," you say "They had reached the porterie."
- At 6:48, "from the portiere," you say "from the porterie."
- At 7:02, "The folds of the portiere," you say "The folds of the porterie."
- Could you add a bit more silence to the end so that there are about five seconds of silence?
- The volume is currently 81.8 dB. Could you amplify it to somewhere within the target range of 87-92 dB? If you're using Audacity, you can amplify by going to Effect>Amplify. By the way, you can check the volume of a file by using the Checker tool.

This is an optional note: I did notice a bit of background noise. It's by no means loud enough to distract the listener, but if you'd like to try noise-cleaning this file to reduce background noise, you can visit this page to learn more.

If you have any questions about editing, I'm happy to help!

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » September 9th, 2021, 6:58 am

Hi,
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
07:51
Chapter 2 updated version available for review.
Cedric

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » September 9th, 2021, 9:18 am

Cedricwn wrote: ↑September 9th, 2021, 6:58 am Hi,
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
07:51
Chapter 2 updated version available for review.
Cedric

Thank you for the updated version! There's just one more change to make and then you'll be all set: could you add about five seconds of silence to the end?

Since the file length for this version is different from the first one, I wanted to ask whether you re-recorded this chapter. If you ever get notes on word changes in your recordings, you don't need to re-record the whole chapter!

You can just record the word or phrase that needs to be redone, paste the new word/phrase in, and delete the old one. If you use Audacity, this brief tutorial might be helpful. You might find it easier to record the new phrase by going to File>New instead of recording it in the same window as the file you're editing.

Not only does this save you a lot of trouble, but it helps the proof-listener because they can spot-check just the parts of the recording that have notes instead of PLing the whole thing again.

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » September 9th, 2021, 11:12 am

Hi,
Attached is the updated file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
07:55
Thanks for your feedback as well, very much appreciated.

Cedric

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » September 9th, 2021, 1:08 pm

Cedricwn wrote: ↑September 9th, 2021, 11:12 am Hi,
Attached is the updated file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_02_gardener_128kb.mp3
07:55
Thanks for your feedback as well, very much appreciated.

Cedric

Happy to help! Thanks for the updated file. It's PL OK!

Cedricwn · Post by **Cedricwn** » September 11th, 2021, 1:03 pm

Hi,

May i claim chapter 4? Thanks.

Cedric.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » September 11th, 2021, 1:37 pm

Cedricwn wrote: ↑September 11th, 2021, 1:03 pm Hi,

May i claim chapter 4? Thanks.

Cedric.

Sure thing, thank you for claiming!

TrLove · Post by **TrLove** » October 7th, 2021, 3:47 pm

If you have no objection to the large text grab, I ‘ll read 7, 8, 9 and 10.

Tina