Complete-GROUP: Pray You, Sir, Whose Daughter? by Helen H. Gardener-ag
Hi there!
I am almost done editing chapter 5 - am wondering about tiny flaws - I said anyway instead of anyhow, for example. I can correct these (there are just a few) if necessary.
May I record chapter 6 as well?
All the best,
Linda
I am almost done editing chapter 5 - am wondering about tiny flaws - I said anyway instead of anyhow, for example. I can correct these (there are just a few) if necessary.
May I record chapter 6 as well?
All the best,
Linda
What is laughter? It is the glorious sound of a soul waking up. -- Hafez
As long as they don't change the meaning of the sentence, I wouldn't worry about slight variations. I'd say that "anyway" and "anyhow" are similar enough to leave as is.
You're welcome to chapter 6! Thank you for claiming!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
Here is Chapter 5 - what fun! thanks
let me know of any corrections needed and now on to chapter 6!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Best,
Linda
let me know of any corrections needed and now on to chapter 6!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Best,
Linda
What is laughter? It is the glorious sound of a soul waking up. -- Hafez
You're welcome, and thank you for your chapter! It sounds great. I have just one note: at 21:24, "he repeated," you say "he replied."Sonrisaj wrote: ↑August 3rd, 2021, 9:34 pm Here is Chapter 5 - what fun! thanks
let me know of any corrections needed and now on to chapter 6!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Best,
Linda
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
I can make that change at 21:24 and reupload.
Here's chapter 6 --
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_06_gardener_128kb.mp3
Will be back for more in a bit!
All the best,
Linda
Here's chapter 6 --
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_06_gardener_128kb.mp3
Will be back for more in a bit!
All the best,
Linda
What is laughter? It is the glorious sound of a soul waking up. -- Hafez
Chapter 5, corrected!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Thanks
Linda
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Thanks
Linda
What is laughter? It is the glorious sound of a soul waking up. -- Hafez
Sonrisaj wrote: ↑August 5th, 2021, 3:33 am I can make that change at 21:24 and reupload.
Here's chapter 6 --
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_06_gardener_128kb.mp3
Will be back for more in a bit!
All the best,
Linda
Thank you for chapter 6 and the edited chapter 5! Both are PL OK!Sonrisaj wrote: ↑August 5th, 2021, 9:48 am Chapter 5, corrected!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3
Thanks
Linda
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09
Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin
Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin
Wow, that was fast! Thank you for section 11 - it sounds great! I have just a few notes:ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 24th, 2021, 12:18 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09
Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin
- At 4:37, "whole outrageous story," I hear "hold outrageous story."
- At 5:54, "it vexed him," you say "it vexed her."
- At 9:02, "not a conscience," you say "not a conscious." (It seems like a minor difference, but it actually changes the meaning of the sentence.)
- At 12:00, "Why should my conscience be developed," you say "Why should my conscious be developed."
- At 12:06, "the conscience of another," you say "the conscious of another."
- At 15:03, "follow my own conscience," you say "follow my own conscious."
- At 15:24, "with her developed conscience," you say "developed conscious."
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
Scarbo wrote: ↑August 24th, 2021, 5:08 pmWow, that was fast! Thank you for section 11 - it sounds great! I have just a few notes:ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 24th, 2021, 12:18 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09
Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin
- At 4:37, "whole outrageous story," I hear "hold outrageous story."
- At 5:54, "it vexed him," you say "it vexed her."
- At 9:02, "not a conscience," you say "not a conscious." (It seems like a minor difference, but it actually changes the meaning of the sentence.)
- At 12:00, "Why should my conscience be developed," you say "Why should my conscious be developed."
- At 12:06, "the conscience of another," you say "the conscious of another."
- At 15:03, "follow my own conscience," you say "follow my own conscious."
- At 15:24, "with her developed conscience," you say "developed conscious."
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:10
Here is the revised version.
Thank you! PL OK.ComfortKC wrote: ↑August 25th, 2021, 1:11 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:10
Here is the revised version.
By all means! Thank you for claiming.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:59
Section 13 is ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin
Section 13 is ready for review. Thanks.
Kevin