Complete-GROUP: Pray You, Sir, Whose Daughter? by Helen H. Gardener-ag

[Sonrisaj]

Hi there!

I am almost done editing chapter 5 - am wondering about tiny flaws - I said anyway instead of anyhow, for example. I can correct these (there are just a few) if necessary.

May I record chapter 6 as well?

All the best,

Linda

[Scarbo]

Hi there!

I am almost done editing chapter 5 - am wondering about tiny flaws - I said anyway instead of anyhow, for example. I can correct these (there are just a few) if necessary.

May I record chapter 6 as well?

All the best,

Linda

As long as they don't change the meaning of the sentence, I wouldn't worry about slight variations. I'd say that "anyway" and "anyhow" are similar enough to leave as is.

You're welcome to chapter 6! Thank you for claiming!

[Sonrisaj]

Here is Chapter 5 - what fun! thanks

let me know of any corrections needed and now on to chapter 6!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3

Best,
Linda

[Scarbo]

Here is Chapter 5 - what fun! thanks

let me know of any corrections needed and now on to chapter 6!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3

Best,
Linda

You're welcome, and thank you for your chapter! It sounds great. I have just one note: at 21:24, "he repeated," you say "he replied."

[Sonrisaj]

I can make that change at 21:24 and reupload.

Here's chapter 6 --

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_06_gardener_128kb.mp3

Will be back for more in a bit!

All the best,
Linda

[Sonrisaj]

Chapter 5, corrected!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3

Thanks

Linda

[Scarbo]

I can make that change at 21:24 and reupload.

Here's chapter 6 --

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_06_gardener_128kb.mp3

Will be back for more in a bit!

All the best,
Linda

Chapter 5, corrected!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_05_gardener_128kb.mp3

Thanks

Linda

Thank you for chapter 6 and the edited chapter 5! Both are PL OK!

[ComfortKC]

Can I read Section 11 Chapter 11? Thanks.

Kevin

[Scarbo]

Can I read Section 11 Chapter 11? Thanks.

Kevin

Sure thing, thank you for claiming!

[ComfortKC]

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09

Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin

[Scarbo]

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09

Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin

Wow, that was fast! Thank you for section 11 - it sounds great! I have just a few notes:

- At 4:37, "whole outrageous story," I hear "hold outrageous story."
- At 5:54, "it vexed him," you say "it vexed her."
- At 9:02, "not a conscience," you say "not a conscious." (It seems like a minor difference, but it actually changes the meaning of the sentence.)
- At 12:00, "Why should my conscience be developed," you say "Why should my conscious be developed."
- At 12:06, "the conscience of another," you say "the conscious of another."
- At 15:03, "follow my own conscience," you say "follow my own conscious."
- At 15:24, "with her developed conscience," you say "developed conscious."

[ComfortKC]

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:09

Section 11 ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin

Wow, that was fast! Thank you for section 11 - it sounds great! I have just a few notes:

- At 4:37, "whole outrageous story," I hear "hold outrageous story."
- At 5:54, "it vexed him," you say "it vexed her."
- At 9:02, "not a conscience," you say "not a conscious." (It seems like a minor difference, but it actually changes the meaning of the sentence.)
- At 12:00, "Why should my conscience be developed," you say "Why should my conscious be developed."
- At 12:06, "the conscience of another," you say "the conscious of another."
- At 15:03, "follow my own conscience," you say "follow my own conscious."
- At 15:24, "with her developed conscience," you say "developed conscious."

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:10

Here is the revised version.

[ComfortKC]

Can I read section 13? Thanks.

Kevin

[Scarbo]

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_11_gardener_128kb.mp3 16:10

Here is the revised version.

Thank you! PL OK.

Can I read section 13? Thanks.

Kevin

By all means! Thank you for claiming.

[ComfortKC]

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/whosedaughter_13_gardener_128kb.mp3 7:59

Section 13 is ready for review. Thanks.

Kevin